New story in need of an editor

curvygrrl

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Hi, I have been reading Literotica for years now and have written a short story that I would like to post. It is a little over 800 words and can be categorized into romance, loving wives, erotic couplings, and possibly fetish for those who have a thing for long hair. It is written in first person.

The story is about a woman who is coming home from work miserable. Her mood begins to turn around when she imagines what her lover, who is waiting for her at home will do to soothe her. There isn't any dialogue, but I still think it is very good (I hope that others do too).

I wrote it specifically to deal with my personal fantasy but then it actually came true and I decided it just might need to be posted. Even feedback would be appreciated if you don't have time to do a full edit.

Speed is appreciated, but not necessary.
 
A recipe for soup: "First you take a leek...."

If you actually DID take a peak, where might you put it without getting your neighbor all riled up over his resulting difficulty in getting his car out of his garage?

I'm looking forward to your story, Ma'am. If I might be helpful in editorial comment I'd be pleased to be of service.

Roadie
 
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