New Story Ideas - Your Opinions Please

[NiteRidder]

Have several new story ideas and would like your opinions on which might have the most reader interest. Would like to eventually write them all and plan to but which do you think would be best received by the Literotica readers.

Your opinion appreciated- and thanking you in advance.

Peter Pan Taught Me To Fly - about the people in our life that teach us that there really is a Never Never land and we really can fly (figuratively speakiing) if we can only have faith and believe in our selves. Nice sentimental ending.

Chains-
Story of Wife and Mother, who goes alone to the family camp in the woods, to enjoy a quiet evening - lounging in the camp's old cast Iron tub with Candles, scented oils etc. but unexpected guests show up and the fun stops. Nice twist ending.

Midnight Train -
About a mysterious waist coated handsome gambler (setting is the late 1800's) and the lady who meets him on the midnight train to San An ton. It seems that four aces weren't the only the only thing that this stanger had up his sleeve and it changes her life forever.


How To -
How to Kiss your Women's Ass - tongue in cheek approach to dealing with the male predicament we often find our selves in- having somehow screwed up again, and making our signifigant other upset with us: a humerous appoach to some serious and interesting ways to mend the predicament, and at the same time open up new sexual possibilities. Fun approach.

How to -

How to Give a Fantastic Sensual Massage- I have actually lectured on this one before and it has always gone over well.

The Brothel Inspectors-
True story about a group of Gi's who mascarade as Official U.S. Army Brothel Inspectors and actually get away with it. (I lived this one.)

Sex in the Steet-
The Story of a big city hooker- told from her perspective.

Please read my stories-

Catagory -Romance
Long As There Are Stars
by NiteRidder ©
An erotic Love Story - the way it ought to be.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51582

Catagory -Non-Erotic
Millie's Smile
by NiteRidder ©
Motivational story with a good feeling.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51321


Catagory -Non Consentual
Fire On the Mountain
by NiteRidder ©
Legendary Tennesee Moonshiner Finds Love
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51577


Catagory -Non-Erotic Stories
The Amazingly Heroic Mr. Burns
by NiteRidder ©
Gentle Giant teaches wise guys about respect.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=51616

NiteRidder -

 

[Guest]

You asked: Have several new story ideas and would like your opinions on which might have the most reader interest. Would like to eventually write them all and plan to but which do you think would be best received by the Literotica readers.

Bear in mind that the majority of Lit. readers seem to want wank-aids. Anything that sounds like a wank-aid gets read. Anything that is pure wank-fest gets good votes. You have to write for this specific audience if you want votes.

Peter Pan Taught Me To Fly - about the people in our life that teach us that there really is a Never Never land and we really can fly (figuratively speakiing) if we can only have faith and believe in our selves. Nice sentimental ending.
Frankly not much chance on Lit.

Chains - Story of Wife and Mother, who goes alone to the family camp in the woods, to enjoy a quiet evening - lounging in the camp's old cast Iron tub with Candles, scented oils etc. but unexpected guests show up and the fun stops. Nice twist ending.
Will go down a bomb, especially if you can get it into the <non-consent> or <incest>, or just possibly <interracial> category.

Midnight Train - About a mysterious waist-coated handsome gambler (setting is the late 1800's) and the lady who meets him on the midnight train to San Antonio. It seems that four aces aren't the only the only thing that this stanger has up his sleeve and it changes her life forever.
See "Chains" above.
Totally tongue in cheek: Isn't it painful to have it up your sleeve? Either that or it's very long, or both?

How To Kiss your Woman's Ass - tongue in cheek approach to dealing with the male predicament we often find ourselves in- having somehow screwed up again, and making our signifigant other upset with us: a humorous appoach to some serious and interesting ways to mend the predicament, and at the same time open up new sexual possibilities. Fun approach.
Might go, might not; I don't really know.

How to Give a Fantastic Sensual Massage - I have actually lectured on this one before and it has always gone over well.
Yes, this will go well if you have lots of graphic descriptions of physiological reactions in there (e.g. how extened her crinkled red nipples surrounded by dollar sized brown areolae become).

The Brothel Inspectors - True story about a group of GI's who masquerade as Official U.S. Army Brothel Inspectors and actually get away with it. (I lived this one.)
This will go well, and I look forward to seeing what category Laurel puts it in!

Sex in the Steet - The Story of a big city hooker- told from her perspective.
As in "The Happy Hooker"? Might go quite well, but not if it is written accurately, i.e. portraying the total contempt most hookers have for their customers. It would have to be a "heart of gold" story.

 

[NiteRidder]

You asked: Have several new story ideas and would like your opinions on which might have the most reader interest. Would like to eventually write them all and plan to but which do you think would be best received by the Literotica readers.

Bear in mind that the majority of Lit. readers seem to want wank-aids. Anything that sounds like a wank-aid gets read. Anything that is pure wank-fest gets good votes. You have to write for this specific audience if you want votes.

Charm_brights

Thank you again and appreciate the advice will try and get one or two out this holiday weekend, as I am just going to take it easy and lounge at the beach.

Actually my highest rated stories do far have been my non-erotic ones like Millie's Smile and my one romantic one - Long as There are Stars. Ratings have been very solid on those two but- Fire on the Mountain -was the most fun to write. Guess I have to make up my mind this weekend - perhaps one of each genre would work out nicely.

Thanks again for the insightful comments and I am sure it will help.

Have a nice 4th.

NiteRidder

 

[Guest]

Have a nice 4th.

Fourth what? My next birthday will be 64th but it isn't until next year.

 

[NiteRidder]

4th of July

4th of July -

Have a nice 4th of July - and as far as the birthday party, we'll cross that bridge when the time comes. Next year is a long way off.

NiteRidder

 

[fanzee1]

Re: 4th of July

4th of July -

Have a nice 4th of July - and as far as the birthday party, we'll cross that bridge when the time comes. Next year is a long way off.

NiteRidder

I don't think it's a really big holiday in Wales.

 

[NiteRidder]

Sorry about that -

Fourth what? My next birthday will be 64th but it isn't until next year.

Just noticed you are from Wales - thanks to fanzee1's note. Guess you wouldn't be celebrating the 4th. Had read your profile once before but it must have escaped me that you are from Wales.

NiteRidder