New story idea

cobalt06

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How about a story of a couple going somewhere and they couldn't wait and had to pull over and have sex in the woods just off the road?

Please let me know if this sounds like a good story.
 
To me, it would need a twist.

Maybe someone is able to watch the couple, and perhaps join in? One part of the couple could assume that it was random, when, in fact, the other half had previously arranged it.
 
someone once said there are no new stories, jut new versions of old stories. What makes it special is the writing. Though I agree with bisexplicit that a twist would make the story more likely to work, even this simple oidea, well written, with lots of hot sex ( and , I think, a good aspect of the pyschology of need), could "work".
 
The classic is that they get caught by a Policeman who ends up joining in. Or maybe a trucker for a change, possibly a female trucker?
 
bisexplicit said:
To me, it would need a twist.

Maybe someone is able to watch the couple, and perhaps join in? One part of the couple could assume that it was random, when, in fact, the other half had previously arranged it.

got my vote!!

there needs to be a reason also why they're so hot for each other...
 
cutsdean said:
The classic is that they get caught by a Policeman who ends up joining in. Or maybe a trucker for a change, possibly a female trucker?

or you do a 'reveal' at the end, diiscover they are married, but NOT to each pther. She ends up preggers. How wil hubby react to this half Asian baby?
 
cobalt06 said:
How about a story of a couple going somewhere and they couldn't wait and had to pull over and have sex in the woods just off the road?

Please let me know if this sounds like a good story.

It's hardly a new story idea; it's one of the stock plots in these parts. But it can be good if done well.
 
Or...

Maybe the couple don't start as a couple. A guy driving cross-country is approached by a frantic, scantily clad woman desperate for a ride. He consents. As the miles tick by he can't help but notice as she shifts in the seat, her shorts moving up and slowly revealing more. Her breasts are jiggling under her top with every bump of the road. He can swear he sees her nipples getting harder as his cock begins to swell. So much room for potential. And the mystery of her background hooks the reader(s) who want to discover why she's on the run to begin with.

And it's slowly revealed that she's on the run from a deranged, faceless man. And he's the man she's running from.

Anyway, just an idea.
 
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