New Story for April Fool's Contest needs editor

[ShaynMackenzie]

I am working on a BDSM story with a bit of magic thrown in. This is a story for the contest.

I am splitting it into 3 sections but will be submitted as a full story.

I have completed the first section, which is about 3500 words. Then the next two sections should be around the same length.

The assistance of an editor would be greatly appreciated. Grammar is not my strong suit, but I am learning quickly

 

[HeyAll]

I can help with structuring.

My email is in my profile.