New Story: Family Toy

[wecson]

Hi all, just getting the hang of the site. Posted a story, and got a fair number of 'views' but no one ranks or adds... wish they would. Gues I should be patient. Neer tired this 'interactive' stuff before - seems great.
Take a look - its sort of incest and bdsm together.

 

[jakelyon]

Patience

It was just approved on the 3rd so I would not expect too much action yet. Also it is a fairly specific story line, incest BDSM. A lot of people can't handle the incest and throw in the BDSM and you exclude another group. You write well and the first thread is nicely done. I am sure you will get some action before too long.

 

[Zingiber]

Hi all, just getting the hang of the site. Posted a story, and got a fair number of 'views' but no one ranks or adds... wish they would. Gues I should be patient. Neer tired this 'interactive' stuff before - seems great.
Take a look - its sort of incest and bdsm together.

It might be helpful to post a link for the lazy: Family Toy.

Jake's right that the theme combination is probably a double minority interest, which will make your pool of readers and contributors smaller.

You should probably add some additional threads to develop the characters and some possible plot directions. That often helps people see places they could add, if they're inclined, while staying in the drift of the story.

-Z.

 

[wecson]

Thanks

I see what you mean by the double minority. I just figured out that people add threads to give people an idea. Ill do that soon. Thanks for the complement on the writing. I might add something a bit less demanding soon too. This is a great place.