New Story - "Criminal Behavior"

[DanDraper]

I would like some feedback on one of my latest stories. It took me a lot of time to work on it, and I would to see what some of you think about it because I'm thinking about doing a sequel to it.

Thank you.


"Criminal Behavior"
https://literotica.com/s/criminal-behavior-1



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[RoperTrace]

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[DanDraper]

Story was believable of what might happen when a wannabe good girl/stripper hooks up with a career criminal and has to bail his ass out of trouble with her body. At one point on page 1, you have Owen morphing into deputy Hauser right before he gets out of the car again.

Dammit, I edited it so many times I can't believe I missed that detail. Thanks for letting me know, I'll fix it as soon as I can.



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