New story coming out

[nakdsub]

Hi everyone,
I am currently working on my spin-off story, "Bill and Amber," but I needed a break from that one so I sat down and wrote a short, loving wives, story called, "But honey, it was only a dance." Once again I'm sure I will get my share of negative comments, but I hope there will be more positive than negative.
It was submitted Sunday night so it should be published Thursday or Friday. I am always looking for constructive criticism so I hope you will let me know what you think if you get time to read it.
Thanks much.

 

[nakdsub]

Hi everyone

This post was originally about, "Bill and Amber," a spin-off from my trilogy series that I am currently writing.

However, in between time, I wrote a short story Called, "But honey, it was only a dance."

I always try to have an underlining theme in my stories. With the trilogy it was that true love can conquer all. With, "It's the thought that counts," I was trying to ask when does cheating start, with the physical act or with the intent? (Not fantasy as some commented, but INTENT.)

In the short story I mentioned above, I wanted to illustrate some of the uncertainties in a relationship. It has just been approved so I assume it will be among the next batch of new stories. If you get a chance to read it I hope you will take the time to comment. I am always looking for constructive criticism as well as glowing acclaim.

P.S. I'm still working on, "Bill and Amber." I hope to have it done shortly.
Thanks

 

[nakdsub]

Somebody please explain something to me

The short story I just mentioned has not been published as far as I can see, and yet I have a comment and 3 votes already. How does that happen?
The story, so far, has the lowest score I've ever received and one comment calling it moronic?
I don't believe the score or the comment is justified. How does this happen?

 

[El Folo]

Dude, link us and shit.

 

[nakdsub]

I see it's now in the, "New Stories" section.

http://www.literotica.com/s/but-honey-it-was-just-a-dance

 

[El Folo]

Yeah, LovingWives is trolled the shit out of. Check this shit out:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=641122

 

[nakdsub]

Uploading Bill and Amber

Well I'm about to upload, "Bill and Amber." I have posted it on a couple of other sites as a test before posting here. It's doing surprising well on one site, and just mediocre on another. I'm guessing it will get middle of the road scores here.
I knew before I even started it, the, "kick her to the curb," crowd will kill me.
I hope others will let me know what you think.
It should take 4 or 5 days to post.
Thanks.

 

[nakdsub]

All 3 chapters

Have now been posted. For those who thought they knew how it was going to end, ha! I fooled ya.
I hope everyone enjoys the read and please, lots and lots of feedback. I learn so much from it.