New Story: Come As You Are

[Guest]

Looking forward to chyoo3, but until then, here's my still hidden new (first) story, "Come As You Are," a story about a group of friends choosing, um, opportune moments to invite their friends to a "come as you are" party.

Come As You Are

Look forward to your comments and additions.

 

[switch76]

I liked the story so far. Your writing style is good and the conversation flows well. The idea is original and unique. It's very ambitious and complicated having 12 main characters but that is not necessarily a bad thing.

Do you have any physical or personality descriptions you want included for any of the characters?

I would suggest you try to write some threads for other writers so people get to know you and your story.