New story about wife Melina.

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I have written a couple of stories before about our out of town escapades before. I finally wrote of another small adventure. Hope it's well recieved. Comments and feedback are appreciated.

Link to story below.

Baby, you can play while I drive.

 

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I just want to say thanks for the positive comments and votes. It's very exciting to know other people appreciate and understand the stories.

 

[mack350]

I have written a couple of stories before about our out of town escapades before. I finally wrote of another small adventure. Hope it's well recieved. Comments and feedback are appreciated.

Link to story below.

Baby, you can play while I drive.

Awesome story!!!!!! Just luv the thought of this happening!!!!!!! I think it's so erotic for couples to watch each other play

 

[Flashlight7.5]

Nice, but...

You have a good story here. It doesn't have much apart from the sex, but the sex is well-written.

However, you lost points with the "Wifey style" description. That fell like a 10-ton weight in the middle of hot prose.

 

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Hmmm. Maybe I should edit that out then. Sometimes you can't see things an outsider does.
Thanks,
and does anyone else think the Wifey comment should go away?

 

[Guest]

Hmmm. Maybe I should edit that out then. Sometimes you can't see things an outsider does.
Thanks,
and does anyone else think the Wifey comment should go away?

What does "Wifey style" mean?

 

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A reference to www.wifeysworld.com
Sexy woman who specializes in oral and taking facials.

 

[Guest]

A reference to www.wifeysworld.com
Sexy woman who specializes in oral and taking facials.

OK - thanks for the explanation.

It does seem to be a bit insulting to wives in general, doesn't it? It jars just a bit in your otherwise loving couple sex story.

 

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I'm not sure where I see it as being insulting, depends on the parties I suppose. But if it's distracting then I want it out. Edited version is on it's way.
Thanks for being honest.

 

[Guest]

I'm not sure where I see it as being insulting, depends on the parties I suppose. But if it's distracting then I want it out. Edited version is on it's way.
Thanks for being honest.

It isn't the act itself, just the name "wifey style" that bothers me. I've written stories that include it, as a matter of fact.

I'm sure it does depend on the parties. And just because it bugs me doesn't mean others won't love it.