new stories!

[IrishSmile]

Hey everyone,
So I'm a recently new member of Literotica and I just got my first story posted on here. I was really hoping for some comments and votes on it whether good or bad. Just enough to know if I should continue to the next chapter! But if it sucks, let me know and I won't bother! (It's Romance, so if you're not into romance then you don't have to read it). Anything would help out! And if you have stories (new or old) you think I should read or check out let me know!

Thank you!

 

[keeblercrumb]

Amsterdam Dreams

Welcome!

Helpful if you copy/paste a link to your story, so folks can find it!

Have fun!

-KC

 

[IrishSmile]

oh sorry haha. just follow this link
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=377345

hope it doesnt suck too bad

 

[keeblercrumb]

Amsterdam Dreams

oh sorry haha. just follow this link
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=377345

hope it doesnt suck too bad

No.. it certainly does not suck.... or fuck, now that I think about it.

But hey! The writing is coherent.... and that puts you way above the curve for newbie writers.... Your editing is certainly better than my last "rush to orgasm"! Unfortunately, that is not saying much...

Keep it up! I do hope you get to sex at some point... but if not.. well.. there is a market for Romance teen novels.....

I may pass, however....

Keep writing!

-KC

 

[glynndah]

A welcome for the little newbie from the good little witch.

 

[rgraham666]

Welcome to the AH.

 

[Tricialen]

Welcome....good luck...

 

[NoJo]

I like the story so far -- you should continue.

But I suggest an italicised warning from you at the top of the story along the lines of "this is the first chapter where I introduce the characters, but there's no explicit sex"

 

[_Lynn_]

Welcome to the AH

 

[caprine]

Hey...

Welcome to Literotica and the AH. Do spend some time reading on the discussion boards. Especially read those that deal with feedback. Eventually, you'll run across quite negative feedback (trolls) and then some useful feedback as well. It's nice to be prepared for it. Good luck with your wrting and do keep writing.

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...I feel more alive when I’m writing than I do at any other time—except when I’m making love. Two things when you forget time, when nothing exists except the moment—the moment of writing, the moment of love. That perfect concentration is bliss.”
- May Sarton

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hi, Irish, and welcome to Literotica and to the AH in particular. I didn't read your story, but I will later. I did gance at it, and what I saw seemed rather soapy. However, that is just my impression.