Rumple Foreskin
The AH Patriarch
- Joined
- Jan 18, 2002
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CALLING ALL CRITIQUERS
KillerMuffin has placed a new story on the Story Discussion Circle's altar to the unending quest for good writing. "Nurse Nailed" is my most recent affront to English letters. Quite possibly the best that can be said about this tale of interracial adultry is, well, what about, it's a short story and not a novella?
So sharpen up your knives all ye classy critiquers and head on over to the SDC. Come on, don't make me name names, you know who you are. And while there, volunteer a story of your own for future despoilation.
Rumple Foresking
KillerMuffin has placed a new story on the Story Discussion Circle's altar to the unending quest for good writing. "Nurse Nailed" is my most recent affront to English letters. Quite possibly the best that can be said about this tale of interracial adultry is, well, what about, it's a short story and not a novella?
So sharpen up your knives all ye classy critiquers and head on over to the SDC. Come on, don't make me name names, you know who you are. And while there, volunteer a story of your own for future despoilation.
Rumple Foresking
