New Rule For Sex In Threads

[RicoLouis]

Well for better or worst I am working on a new story. Not to worry its not another omg how many characthers are there thing. Though I did have a twisted Idea for a play on 3 families called 3 generations, but enough about that. Just thought I would through an Idea I had for the story as far as the writing goes. I am putting a three thread rule for all sex scenes. Basically I have seen a bunch of threads where the sex and orgasm take place in a paragraph or two. Some time with the guy getting hard and cumming again within the same thread.

Basically the rule will be the first thread is foreplay. the second thread will be penitration. Where do you want to stick it? Pussy, Between Breast, Mouth? And the third will be orgasim. Where do you want to blow your load? In Mouth, On Face, On Tits. Or who do you want to blow your load on. the blond or the red head.

Any thoughts?

 

[GoodBoy741]

I also dislike when the sex is wrapped up in a paragraph or two.

However, this sounds a little rigid. Things will get a little monotonous if the sex follows the pattern that you described every time.

Plus, you don't always need three threads. Having one thread that covers foreplay, sex, and orgasm can still be good.

 

[Zingiber]

I am putting a three thread rule for all sex scenes. Basically I have seen a bunch of threads where the sex and orgasm take place in a paragraph or two. Some time with the guy getting hard and cumming again within the same thread.

This rule holds for your new story?

It sounds like your complaint is that the descriptions of sex are too rushed. Having the thread breaks might help, or it might not. Have you been telling the thread authors to slow down and add more detail?

You should write a couple of example sets of 3-thread scenes, maybe with some alternative choices (to make the thread break meaningful). Examples of what you're looking for make a rule easier to understand and follow.

So one version of penetration might be "none," or "She says, how about we do this instead?"

The rule is kind of focused on male-female intercourse, from the viewpoint of the man ("Where do you...?"). What about scenes with just women?

As the editor of a story, you are free to comment, criticize, reject, or rewrite threads that displease you. A rule should hopefully make your work easier without discouraging writers that you want to keep contributing.

So my thoughts are:

Write a couple three-thread examples for your contributors to read and get a better idea. Try the rule for your new story and see how it goes.

Write comments to your contributors on old and new stories. Use their Chyoo profile email page if you want to accept an imperfect thread but feel that the author should try harder next time. Point them at good examples if you can.

-Z.

P.S.: "Three Generations" might be interesting.

 

[RicoLouis]

Ya this is just for my new story. I can see the point about it becoming kind of ridged. I just really hate one thread sex scenes. This is suppose to be choose your on-

As far as the whole male / female thing. It could be translated over to girl-girl also. Though most female-female sex is sort of foreplay it can still be broken down. I have had it happen a few times where I think a writer fits the style and then I make them a trusted member, just so I don't have to approve ever one of there threads and I come back and its either I have to except the rushed style or delete several threads. But its not just my stories, sometimes I will be reading and the story is going good and then. poof.