new posters story idea **blushing**

[kittenkatin]

Hi everybody...new poster here. Always fancied myself a bit of a wordsmith but have never actually written anything so I figured I'd throw out a few fantasies I have and if anyone likes i can expand them into full stories or somesuch...

Keep in mind I'm new here so i have no idea what's come before me...I'm sure this story has been donein some form or another...and I'm sure alot has cum before me... >g<


First story centers on a father (lets call him "Dan") who becomes obsessed with his daughter (we'll name her Veronica) when he accidentily spies on her having sex with her boyfriend ("Mark")...the father says nothing but sees his daughter in a new light...

Meanwhile Mark and his best friend (we'll make him an earthy greek boy) Spiro have been planning on seducing Veronica since she and mark started dating and succeed after talking her into watching a dirty movie with them on the couch with her sitting between them.As the young men begin using thier hands on Veronica,teasing her and getting her wetter and wetter they before they start taking turns on her...Marks father walks in and joins in!

Enjoying what he found Marks father decides to invite veronica to his office and shares her with two of his co-workers before the third arrives...Veronicas father who sees his daughter spread and waiting and goes for it...

The story ends with a scene between the two later alone at home...

 

[Impetus]

Hot. Definitely hot. You could do a lot of neat things with a setup lilke that. I'd say give it a try and see how it comes out. I'd definitely read a story with a summary like that.

-I

 

[Bob Egg]

Nice.

Nice plan for a story. I think it would be interesting if Spiro turned out to be
Veronica's father's bastard love-child from
a holiday tryst as well. I'd definitely keep
bringing the story back to Veronica's father's
growing passion for his daughter, and how he deals with it.

B. Egg.

 

[kittenkatin]

wow...thanks guys! The scene i keep going back to is veronica on the couch between Spiro and Mark...shifting around her skirt hikes up as she watches the scene on the screen and both young men start seducing her with a little rubby foreplay and end up making her lose control when they both finger her at the same time...

 

[Tatewaki]

Seems pretty good to me. Do you intend to write it up?

-T