New poetry direction...

[RisiaSkye]

This is pretty unusual work for me, and I'd really like to know what you think. (Other poets, you're doubly invited, even begged to respond).

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=23067

Take care all,
Risia

 

[Natalie Nessus]

 

[KatPurrs]

of gymnasts

Risia,
As you already know, I love this poem and gave it a 5. I have always been turned on at the sight of a man doing the iron cross....tight body, bare chest, nice protrusion in those pants. h-h-h-h!

What I liked too, and what surprised me, was the subtle nuance of domination at the end.

KatPurrs~

 

[Debbie]

Risia I too thought the combination of the poem giving me a visual feeling of your gymnast (mmmmm) and the twist of domination was wonderful. I voted a 5 too. Way to go Risia!!!

 

[RisiaSkye]

You like it, you really like it!

I appreciate everyone's kind words. It's an odd blend off imagery, and I wasn't sure it would work. You know how it goes...just because I like it, doesn't mean it will make sense to anyone else, right?

Anyway, thanks to everyone...