new poet...

[valkyrieblonde]

i'm a new poet on here..."come lay with me" is the first poem i've written in a long time....and i'd appreciate any feedback...

 

[Guest]

valkyrieblonde's poem is found here

 

[valkyrieblonde]

thank you for adding that...i'm very new to this...and not even sure of how to use the threads...i appreciate it...

 

[valkyrieblonde]

anyone who would like to comment on the poem, please leave me a message...i'm feeling a bit lost and confused by the threads...perhaps mine is unwinding...so i'll leave it hanging...thank you for your time...

 

[minsue]

I'm not a poet, I just lurk on the board, but check your PM box for whatever my ramblings are worth.

Welcome to Lit!



- Mindy

 

[WindChyme]

Newbie, too

anyone who would like to comment on the poem, please leave me a message...i'm feeling a bit lost and confused by the threads...perhaps mine is unwinding...so i'll leave it hanging...thank you for your time...

I'm almost as new as you are, Honey, and I gave you a vote, but for some reason, there didn't seem to be a setup for feedback.

You have a vivid mind and a good way with words. I think the mechanics could be better, but that's just the work part. Methinks you had the pleasure part as you went along

 

[Guest]

You have a PM val.