New poems

[amyfirst]

I submitted my first 2 poems last week and got lots of hits but did not allow voting. I changed my mind and decided to permit voting; I hope I did not make a mistake.

Links to poems:
http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=42274
http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=42132

 

[juicygirl]

daddy's girl

I liked your stuff but it kind of, well kind of weirded me out. If it hadn't ended the way it did I would have been very disturbed and twisted. I guess I never liked my daddy that well. You got my vote.

 

[CarnalGerund]

Wow

Hi Amy,

I would say that you did NOT make a mistake by allowing voting. Very very erotic. I'm around your age. 24/m. You in college? What are you studying?

CG

 

[CarnalGerund]

Hey Juicy

I knew you'd have excellent taste
I agree, the ending was definitely good. As I understand it, the daddy-daughter fantasies are more of a control thing. Though there's debate about which person has control. Quite possibly nobody has control there. That might be what's so good about it.

CG

 

[juicygirl]

daddy daughter

Hi Carnal,

I suppose its an open question whose in control, but I guess I think the grownup ought to be. It is kind of a kinky fantasy though . . .

 

[JUDO]

Very stimulating

AF -

I think you got a mention in the "The New Poems List" thread in the last week or so for your first post.

You tell an erotic story with your poetry and from the small gathering of fans already seeking you out, looks like you're on your way to creating a niche.

Have fun! Write more.


- Judo

 

[WickedEve]

amyfirst

I read you daddy daughter poem last night or the night before. I'm glad it ended the way it did. That got rid of a lot of guilt I was feeling for liking the poem so much.

Wicked Eve

 

[amyfirst]

Thank You

Oh Gosh, thank you all. I will try to write more, and I truly appreciate any and all feedback. I just submitted a new poem called "My English Teacher" and hope it will be accepted soon.
I am building up my courage to try a prose story with narration and dialogue and full sentences and maybe - gasp- paragraphs. [giggle]
Again, I am so delighted that I please other people with my writing.
---Love, Amy

(It is incredibly sweet and all but does anyone know why I am listed as a virgin, blush!!!!!)

 

[JUDO]

Good luck!

AF -

When you write your first prose story, you will be sorely tempted to post it and get immediate feedback, but I really, really reccomend that you submit your story to some of the editors here first.

Many of us are willing to look at your work and make certain that punctuation, style, spelling, continuity, etc. get scrutiny from a second set of eyes.

Ask any of us who write the stories here as well. The least we'll do is point you to a good local editor.

Best Wishes - Judo

PS- Virgin? Not enought posts, yet, doll.

 

[71bruce8]

Literotica status

Well Judo or whoever what is this thing about "virgin" or "experienced" etc? I am listed as "virgin" {rolling my eyes} can I just change this or are there some authorities or set of criteria that determine how you are listed? Please reply someone. Thanks.

 

[JUDO]

Post more

71b -

Just post more. I don't recall what the numbers need to be. Does anyone else? Anyway, the first few "titles" are the same for everyone.

It starts with "Virgin" (I think up to like 100 posts or something), at that point you become "Experienced" then "Really Experienced" then "Really Really Expierienced" then "Literotica Guru" then after a thousand posts (yes, that's 1000) you get your own title.

There might be some more info on this on the Lit FAQ page (Or you could just ask Weird Harold, he knows everything - lol).


- Judo

 

[Fairytat]

If Im not mistaken

I think that someone (possibly Weird Harold) posted the numbers for the titles and stuff. Don't remember where but if you look around you will find it

101 -- Avatar (that's all that mattered to me at the time hehe)

 

[amyfirst]

There is something really adorable about being considered a virgin in Literotica. [Giggle]
Especially because of the way I sometimes misbehave in the Literotica Chat room.
Now I can say, "Oh no Daddy, I can't do that, I'm a Virgin, tee hee."

 

[JUDO]

Virginization

There is something really adorable about being considered a virgin in Literotica.

Isn't it amazing
The many ways in which we
Can be considered "virgins."

Take the phrase,
"The first time I..."
And finish it any way you like.

At one time, you were a virgin
Many times over.

Unblemished,
Untarnished,
Uncherished,
Unvanquished.

A vessel to be filled.
A hammer of God.
A virgin.