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Da Vinci's Dreams

Bizarre machines
Icons and flora
Serpentine curls, hidden shapes
Child of nature, thinking mans' artist
Polyhedron and horse
Reaching for the universe
Visions in 30,000 pages
Timeless and inspirational
So long ago...



I'll post more later

 

[ExistentialLuv]

Is this thread just for your new poems or any new poems?

 

[Angeline]

ExistentialLuv said

Is this thread just for your new poems or any new poems?

If you want your poems read in this forum, it's best to start a new thread of your own for them. Be sure to specify whether you want feedback or not. There's been confusion in the past about whether people who start these threads want their poems critiqued. I no long do reviews unless the thread starter specifically asks for them. It's probably good to know too that most reviewers here will assume you want advice on how to improve your poems, so it will be critical (in the sense of critique, not personal criticism), but helpful (we hope).

 

[ExistentialLuv]

If you want your poems read in this forum, it's best to start a new thread of your own for them. Be sure to specify whether you want feedback or not. There's been confusion in the past about whether people who start these threads want their poems critiqued. I no long do reviews unless the thread starter specifically asks for them. It's probably good to know too that most reviewers here will assume you want advice on how to improve your poems, so it will be critical (in the sense of critique, not personal criticism), but helpful (we hope).

Thanx for the info sweetie. I was thinking of collecting all the poetry I have wrote for Pollyjean and posting a thread on them. I am always looking for constructive criticism and any way to improve my writing. Once again thanx