New piece ("Tatoo You")

[JUDO]

I wrote this first as a melody with rhythm. It looked something like this:

[A section]

- ___ _ ___ ___A
- ___ _ ___ ___A
- ___ _ ___ ___ ______B

- ___ _ ___ ___C
- ___ _ ___ ___C
- ___ _ ___ ___ ______B

- ___ _ ___ ___D
- ___ _ ___ ___D
- ___ _ ___ ___ ______B

(Repeat)

[Bridge Section]
_ _ _ ___ _ ___
_ _ _ ___ _ ___
_ _ _ ___ _ ___ ______

_ _ _ ___ _ ___
_ _ _ ___ _ ___
_ _ _ ___ _ ___ ______

[A section Again Once Only]


The longer the dash, the longer the beat.

Then I wrote lyrics to the song.
Decided the heart of the song was to be about "tatoos." And there you are.

So, what is it? A song lyric? Rhythmic Poem? It's "song form" AABA in the very traditional sense.

"Tatoo You"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=37145


- Judo

 

[WickedEve]

Whatever it is, it's good!
Love the first stanza. I read it several times.

Render it frightful.
Ever delightful.
Dragons and Ships abound.

 

[RisiaSkye]

JUDO, you've got mail.

 

[JUDO]

Form?

Thanks, WE. That whole stanza came to me in a flash in the shower. (Flashing in the shower? Isn't that redundant?)

Anyway, what do you think of the method? That was the first time I've ever been able to write lyrics to a melody and so easily, too.

RS, you have PM. (hee-hee, I pun-ish myself.}

 

[WickedEve]

Well, I'm walking around the house singing it! lol
The first time it didn't work out so well, but then I got a little tune going.
It's catchy! And the way you went about it worked.
You should do this one on literotica as an audio poem! You could sing it. Seriously!

WE

 

[JUDO]

Sing?

Would love to, but can't. Certain problems with my profession. (Yes, I'm intentionally being mysterious - don't ask.) Thanks, though, good suggestion, WE.


- Judo