New Orleans Fantasy........

bethyj32

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This is a "PURE" fantasy/day dream for me.........I'd like feed back and opinions...
Thanks!

Its wet and humid as I step off the plane, in early March.......Its Mardi Gras time. And even though I swore I'd never come to New Orleans this time of year; since my seperation from my husband, I decided to live a little.Not quite sure what to expect, the airport is packed with tourists. I pick up my bags, and head out to find the Limo Shuttle I had ordered."What in the Hell am I doing here?" I think to myself, as I cross the traffic to the parking area. My limo's there and I hop in. 1/2 hr. later deep in the heart of the French Quarter, being dropped off at a beautiful boutique hotel.....The old brick facade, and wrought iron balconies beckon me welcome.....Inside everythings plush and sumptous.....Roses, velvets,brocade, and marble grace the sprawling entry. I check into my suite......On the way up in the elavator I notice this quiet, contemplative gentleman.....He gives me this side ways half grin....Instinctively I blush.......Yet smile back.....His eyes are stunningly hazel and his hair is sandy blonde.....He's close to my age, I'm guessing. Very adorable, wholesome looking.
We get off on the same floor, and as I walk towards my room I notice he's watching me out of the corner of my eye. I quickly walk into my room.....My hearts pounding......"Was I just imagining that?" I think to myself....But I dismiss it as quickly as I think it......I set out running a bath, and get out a sexy black knee length dress that ties at the waiste, and plunges in the front......I'll wear a black satin corset, and g-strings, and black pump sandals........Mysterious. I want to look seductive and mysterious. I jump in the tub and wash off.....Hair up in a knot......There's a knock at the door...."Who could that be?".......I throw a robe on.......I walk to the door, and its the bell boy with a beautiful mass of red roses.....I say,"Thank You".........Give the boy a tip.........And bring them in......I set them on the dresser........There's a note.."You are magnificent.....Please meet me for dinner in the Garden room in 1/2 hr. I'll be wearing a black leather jacket........." There's no name.....Just xoxoxox.......Well I'm here to have fun so I'll do it!!!!!!!!I slip on my attire, and arrange my hair so it frames my face and shoulders, spilling down the back.....Next the makeup and lipstick......A lovely red color.......I glance at myself sideways in the mirror....Seductive and Mysterious......I do look yummy and voluptous........Deffinately not the frumpy little house wife anymore...I walk out the door, and down to the lobby....I walk into the garden room, and before I can say anything........I am ushered to a table.......But no one's there.......All the waiter says is,"Your dinner companion will be here shortly." Its a beautiful room with tall ceilings, and gorgeous chandiliers......Tapestry curtains with a chinese motif hang on the windows......That open like doors to a lush courtyard....While I waite for my companion, I order a nice glass of wine, which I sip leisurely....But then I see him...........He's walking across the room........Still wholesome looking; but there's somthing more......Somthing darker, hotter then what I saw in the elavator.......Like an animal, he walks towards me.......He's dressed in all black.....I can't take my eyes off him.......I can instinctively feel myself get wet, and the breathe catch in my throat.........

Now boys and girls, would you like to add a tid bit? Not sure if this is the right place to write this story, but I'd like to have some fun with the men here at Lit........If you like to write, and like seductive storys lets see what mayhem we can create.......

Wink.......
Beth

ps. I have someone in my mind when I'm writing this........Maybe he'll read it......Maybe he'll add somthing to it.....Whatever the case lets have fun!
 
New Orleans Fantasy Ch.2

In awe......I sat there for a moment, and felt like the room was spinning.......As he came closer; I swear his eyes flashed red for a brief moment.......His grin turning slightly wicked....Then he seated himself, introducing himself while he did so.Reaching his hand out gently carressing/kissing my finger tips........"Hello, my name is Marcus Dummond"........His kiss still lingered there, on my finger tips.........I was stunned, speechless really. I had never been so titilated by a man...Possessed if you will.Facinated and intrigued by this man, I introduced myself."My name is Bethany Parker", having reverted back to my maiden name after my break up.We chatted about many things. From life, love, politics......Minutes passed to hours......Our food came and went........When we realized the Restraunt was closing......As a gentleman should, he stood up, and pulled my seat out for me, taking my trembling fingers while he did so. He must have noticed, because his eyes began to twinkle, and that wicked grin played upon his lips.....Paying the the waiter; we snuck out the door, to the courtyard...It was full of ferns, Magnolias, and other exotic plants.....The slight ripple of a three tiered fountain, high lighted by small spot lights being the center piece....A few wrought iron table and chairs, here and there. There was a beautiful silver moon hanging in the air......Suspended by a magical thread....A handful of teaky torches graced little intimate corners of the oasis..
Standing there unable to speak, it was as if he knew my mind.........He leaned down, and kissed me......His long fingers tracing my jaw bone.....Gently scraping it.......Allowing myself to "FEEL" for the first time in 8 yrs. To just "BE".....
Our tongues danced, and twined. Wrapped in each other. I could feel my body molten under his touch....His fingers trailing along my back bone now, down over my bottom to the hem of my skirt......My eyes flashed open, when I realized his intentions....My breathe, caught......I couldn't speak, I couldn't stop.....All he said was,"SHHHHHHH"......As he started snaking his lips along my neck.....His fingers working their magic, going up along my inner thigh.
I felt dizzy, and delirious....Taking my hand, he walks me to the other side of the courtyard....Where we sit facing each other, at a secluded table......This time more insistant, urgent.......His kisses are more passionate, daring....His left hand working my legs apart, forcing them apart.....Again I want to protest, but Marcus's only protest is,"Shhhhhh".........Finally I am able to say,"But what if someone see's us...."

More to cum kiddies! Enjoy..........
 
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New Orleans Fantasy Ch.3

"It doesn't matter if anyone see's us." His eye's fixed on me......I was locked to them.....He moved his chair closer, so the seats were touching....Then grabbing my hips, he pulled me to the edge of the seat........Until I feel his hand rubbing the fabric above my crotch.......Slow circles with his pointer finger, just above my clit...........On the fabric........He wants what lies beneath it.........He grabs the flimsy material that seperates his touch from my hot lips........Ripping it apart......His eyes are flashing red again.........I'm entranced........His thumb is working my nub in circles, as he fiercly bury's 3 fingers into my pussy........My eyes roll back, as my groans errupt from my mouth, after 8 yrs. of being numb.....At some point I open my eyes, but things are not the same.......I am still "IN" the courtyard, but there are people everywhere.....All wearing masks, and wearing attire from the 1700's............Many are having daliances of their own, and others are just watching the affair..........In one corner of the courtyard I can see a beautiful black woman being worked over by two handsome European men......One is suckling her breasts, which are free from the top of her bodice, and the other is lapping her pussy juices, from under her skirts...........The scene is highly erotic and intense.........people scattered throughout the courtyard, each a different scene of intensity....Two men here and there; touching and enjoying eachothers "Company"........A woman here and there, fondling herself........Others just gazing with lust through their masks......."Where, where am I?" I stammer....."In my world", Marcus says.....At this moment Marcus falls to his knees, and suckles my wet pussy lips.......His tongue is there, his fingers finding my wet pussy hole.......Probing the recesses....My eyes roll back into my head as I hear my voice mingle with the other voices........."Its a beautiful song".......I think to myself......All the voices carried away, rising in pitch........In need......I feel my own orgasm starting to spill as I buck my hips on Marcus's lips, while holding the seat under me.......Harder and faster, the voices are screaming now, as my own voice joins theirs....My eyes still firmly shut.........Then it hits me as the lightening flashes, the waves of pleasure running down my spine, connecting with my hips,to my pussy................My scream errupts fierce and passionate.....Subsiding into myself as the preasure releases me, fading into black........Only to open my eyes; and find myself in the here and now, alone in the courtyard......

*ALL charactors are ficticious, not directed in a negative fashion towards anyone.....Just a fantasy........Would love input!!!!!!!! Enjoy and CUM again...........
 
Beth,

I think that it's great that you took your time to write out what you're thinking and feeling as far as your fantasy goes. How ever, I do want to point out that there's a key on your keyboard labeled, "Enter." I specifically didnt read your posts because you used that key maybe a dozen times through all of that.

Also, your excessive use of periods (...........) makes text difficult to read. I'd suggest removing them or using a carriage return (the "Enter" key I mentioned earlier). Commas are something else you might want to try instead of 8-10 periods.

Now, I'm sure that I come off sounding like an ass by posting this, but that's not my objective. I just think that you'll get more feedback and replies to your posts if they're written in a manner that's easy to read. If you go back and edit your posts, I'd be more than happy to read them since I'm going on a vacation to New Orleans at the end of next month.

Cheers and take care,

-T
 
Thank you for your cirtique'

I love writing! From here on out I'll try to be more "Punctual". I loved New Orleans, and sincerely hope you become as enamored by it as I am! Its a city that oozes history, and sensuality. Please have a fun, and safe trip. Try not to look to "Touristy" otherwise you can become a prime target for pick pockets, and bums..No offense!I went through it, but all in all it was amazing.The Haunted Tours are awesome.Hopefully you won't hit the rain like I did.And Jackson Square is amazing, along with Pirates Alley. If you get a chance go to Jean Lafette's Bar, and order a Hurricaine.If you want to know anything about that city, I'd be happy to help.

Beth

* Future Nawlins resident!
 
N'or Linz

It is a fine spot....may I recommend the Cafe Du Monde and a beignet and chik'ry coffee and a lil trip to Brennans for breakfast. Don't go hung over form those Hurricanes OR a great dining experience will go for naught!!!!!

You know what..................................I'd say keep up the PERIODICITY...................it sort of works.....................................pour moi! :rolleyes:
 
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