New... Not sure if this is the right spot or not.

[niteshade]

I have just submitted my first story, and it seems to ok, but constuctive critisism is always a good thing, I think. So any ideas anyone has would be great. Ty,

Niteshade

Duh... the link would be helpful. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=96204

 

[English Lady]

niteshade....you'll find that this sort of feedback request goes down better on the story feeback forum!


Hello and welcome though

 

[Quasimodem]

I have just submitted my first story, and it seems to ok, but constuctive critisism is always a good thing, I think. So any ideas anyone has would be great. Ty,

Niteshade

Duh... the link would be helpful. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=96204

Like English Lady said . . . and feel free to continue feeling about until you find the Right Spot.

 

[niteshade]

ty everyone...

Niteshade