New neighbor

[heyitslizzie565]

Hello my name is Lizzy.

I read this story a while back about a girl who is about 20 who moves into a country town and decides to sit by a tree and read. While reading, her neighbor who has a son who is about 18, but looks like he is 10-12 years old is dressed up as a cowboy and asks to tie her up. Since he is so young she thinks he is just innocently just being cute and allows him too. It turns out he is smarter than he looks and takes advantage of her and removes her clothes and touches her body all over. The kid has a strong sense of curiosity being this close to a girl for the first time and having control over what he can do. The excitement ends when a goat comes out of a nearby shrub and scares the kid away and leaves the girl helpless to a goat who then licks her all over and the story gets weird from here.

If someone could rewrite this better than the original but continue with the boy doing stuff rather than the goat ruining everything that would be great . He could possibly leave and bring a friend or humiliate her further! There is many possibilities here

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... who is about 18, but looks like he is 10-12 years ...

This can cause real problems with the censors here, who don't like "age play".

 

[DarkBee]

This can cause real problems with the censors here, who don't like "age play".

And they will block it for involving non-magical animals, which is one of the hard no's.

 

[LordMhoram]

..leaves the girl helpless to a goat who then licks her all over and the story gets weird from here.

I should think this will get you shot down too.

 

[shesnotcheating]

And they will block it for involving non-magical animals, which is one of the hard no's.

Well, since she's asked that the goat be excluded from the re-write, this shouldn't be an issue.

 

[heyitslizzie565]

I dont see an issue with those things