new memeber needing help with story(please)

[myhotwifestef]

i have stories of my wife i would like to tell but find it difficult to write them where they make since. she has also wanted to start being with other people and us continue to married and in love. we have talked about it and decided to try it. i need help with composing a story on her for her. thanks

 

[bandelero]

Hiya and welcome to Lit....you are certainly going the right way by asking for advice BEFORE trying to post a story. It may well seem easy enough, but there are a few things that will make any story go better.

Although I am not an Editor as such I would always be happy to look over any story base you had with an eye to spellings, grammar etc.

To get an idea of just WHAT to write, then your best bet is to read at least 6 stories from the genre that takes your fancy...ie Loving Wives....BDSM...Anal etc...note how the author has written the story, 1st person...3rd person....note the spacing of paragraphs which are essential to make any story readable.
Jot down some notes...characters, rough story line....flesh it out...

If you head to the Editors Forum, there are loads of people listed who would also be happy to help you with getting your story from your head onto the pages of Lit and who have had their own stories published so know what to do technically too.

GOOD LUCK!

 

[myhotwifestef]

Hiya and welcome to Lit....you are certainly going the right way by asking for advice BEFORE trying to post a story. It may well seem easy enough, but there are a few things that will make any story go better.

Although I am not an Editor as such I would always be happy to look over any story base you had with an eye to spellings, grammar etc.

To get an idea of just WHAT to write, then your best bet is to read at least 6 stories from the genre that takes your fancy...ie Loving Wives....BDSM...Anal etc...note how the author has written the story, 1st person...3rd person....note the spacing of paragraphs which are essential to make any story readable.
Jot down some notes...characters, rough story line....flesh it out...

If you head to the Editors Forum, there are loads of people listed who would also be happy to help you with getting your story from your head onto the pages of Lit and who have had their own stories published so know what to do technically too.

GOOD LUCK!

you have been a great help

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

And don't forget to ramble through the Writer's Resources. There is a lot of good stuff in there that will help you learn to put your stories together, make your characters talk, make them readable and read by the unwashed masses.

 

[FallenMorgan]

Just keep some things in mind:

• Use Diologue! I hate stories that are just paragraph after paragraph.
• Have a storyline. I'm annoyed by stories that are just "I fucked her, the end."
• Don't explain everything at once. If it's a story about your wife, don't explain it all in one paragraph, like, at one point write about how you met, at a point in the story that would remind you of how you met. Not sure how to explain it too much.
• Don't focus too much on the sex. If you wanna make a good story, don't make the sex the main subject.
• NO SEXUAL INUENDOS FFS!!! I'm sick of stories with titles like "Jenny Cums to Hollywood" or something.

 

[Wildcard Ky]

i have stories of my wife i would like to tell but find it difficult to write them where they make since. she has also wanted to start being with other people and us continue to married and in love. we have talked about it and decided to try it. i need help with composing a story on her for her. thanks

I'd be interested in this. I'm always drawn more to something that's real life than anything else. I'd be glad to discuss this further and see about writing something.

Feel free to read over stuff that I've written on this site. If you like what you read, shoot me a PM and we'll see where it goes.