new member comments on story, BROKEN VOWS

[AloneAgain]

After having hung around here for the past month or so, I have finally decided to come out've the lurker mode and start posting.

The story that I read today, BROKEN VOWS, was just fantastic. SteamyChik (sp?) has the beginings of a delightfully sinful tale. Perhaps all the more erotic because it prods one of the worlds biggest institutions, the 'church'.

Have a look-see. I think you may be pleasantly surprised.


Great story line and nice writing.

More please !!

 

[Flagg]

This was an excellent story and promises to only get better. The narrative was comfortable and flowing, the descriptions and sex scenes marvellously conducted and the emotions of the characters magically captured.

I can't see anyone giving it less than a 5.

Well Done.

 

[bluntforcemama]

As far as I can see, I haven't come upon very many stories that DON'T deserve a four or five! So this would be like a 7 or something... if I could get that high. Bravo!

 

[SteamyChik]

AloneAgain, Flagg and Myst thank you so much! You made my day and night and I will probably float on into tomorrow with your kinds words. Chapter 2 has been submitted and the Fairy Godmother Laurel will hopefully be whacking it with her magic wand soon.

Now I must go purr. Thanks again!