New little Jip story!

[cantdog]

The thing posted today!

Here it is!

I'm on that old familiar high again, oh yeah.

 

[Guest]

The thing posted today!

Here it is!

I'm on that old familiar high again, oh yeah.

Getting an early start on that high this morning, aren't ya babe? http://bestsmileys.com/smoking/6.gif

http://bestsmileys.com/kissing1/25.gif

(The story is excellent, as you well know! Let the party begin!)

http://bestsmileys.com/party/5.gif

 

[Stella_Omega]

The thing posted today!

Here it is!

I'm on that old familiar high again, oh yeah.

It is WAAYYY too early in the day for me to be reading this.
But, I want to say that your characters are so well drawn. Jip and Kitties are real people. That is absolutely awesome, as in- I'm in awe!
IS that the way you always write? because, if so- I'm your fan!

 

[cantdog]

Actually, yes. Now I do. I have improved. My first story is on Lit, still. Some of the characters seem real, but others are cardboardy, in that one. My stories occur to me as dialogues, and I fill in the action and context from there. Thank you very much!

 

[NoJo]

I fucking hope Yui doesnt see this thread title.

 

[carsonshepherd]

I fucking hope Yui doesnt see this thread title.

I actually heard a brief peep from Yui last night. I hope she comes back, I miss her.

Sorry for the threadjack, cant...

 

[cantdog]

Yui can really write; so intense! And she's got such an incisive mind. Judicious and delicious all in one package. We are poorer without yui.

 

[sophia jane]

I actually heard a brief peep from Yui last night. I hope she comes back, I miss her.

Sorry for the threadjack, cant...

Continuing threadjack- is she well? I miss her too!

SJ

 

[ravenmx]

Hey Cant.

Saw your thread and had to go read your new story. I voted and commented.

Great story.

 

[cantdog]

Glad to have pleased! I think, in fact, that the whole point of the thread was to promote just that reaction!

I am trying an experiment with this one. It is short and really contains, objectively, very little outside the seduction it describes. But I wanted it to have a meaning, to evoke a larger world in which the characters move, and still stay short enough to be read. There are many places where I trust the reader to fill in the blanks. It was an attempt to write evocatively rather than explicitly. I imply what they are like as people, rather than say so outright. I mention their emotional contexts, but don't go on at any length about the place they start from and the effect of the encounter on them. The reader has to imagine the whole picture from small clues and what i hope are telltale signs.

The risk is to leave so much out that it's no longer vivid.