New line to Penetrator

[u21098]

I've added a new storyline to my story "Penetrator" along the original terminator storylines. Please feel free to browse and add!

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/1896

 

[jakelyon]

Do you mean the thread line beginning with "You are a human and running"? I don't quite understand the connection of the answer to the thread body. Who is the human who is running? I am assuming the UPS guy will be our inhuman friend and then the running will start, but I am not sure.

Sorry if I am being dense, perhaps you could explain a little more what you want to see here. I really like this story, having added a few threads to it, and would like to work on it again.

Thanks.

 

[u21098]

You've hit the nail on the head. Sorry, perhaps I should have been clearer. The intention is for our main human character to commence running with a human/cyborg sent back from the future a la Terminator.

The UPS girl is supposed to be a penetrator, commencing the storyline.