new kid on the block

[sandwichman]

hi all, I have just submitted my first story to lit and would welcome your feedback. its called broken down. please be gentle, im just a virgin lol

 

[nakdsub]

It would be easier for the readers if you ...

post a link to your story so they don't have to go looking for it.

 

[Beemnat]

yes. post a link

 

[Ember_on_ice]

Went looking

I have a fondness for stories about a woman stranded on the roadside and being "rescued" by a man or two. So, I went looking for your story, since the title seemed promising, but I can't find it.

Has it been accepted yet, or did you just submit it?

 

[sandwichman]

i didnt realise that it would take so long to have it approved... sorry guys, keep coming back and i wil post a link here when it is. I submitted another story as well. hopefully they wont take too long to be approved