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KayannaRose

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Hello everyone. I have been reading and enjoying your stories for a long time, and have finally gotten the courage up to write some erotic stories of my own. I have always written love stories and essays, but never had the guts to write something "dirty". ;)

I have had some good feedback from the first story, "Dawn's New Day." I have completed part 2 in the series, called "Story Time," but it hasn't been approved. I also wrote a story about my favorite sport, NASCAR. The story is "The Car Chick", and I personally think it feels rushed. There was more I could have done, I think, more drivers introduced to the female charector. But, I didn't go there.

So, what do you guys think of them? After reading your posts for awhile, I feel that I value your opinions.

Thanks,

Kayanna

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=109014
 
I'm no expert I'm not going to preach to you about grammer or puncuation or any of that lol... i enjoyed reading your story's. Very erotic and stimulateing...
Keep it up.
 
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