New here, new writer, seeking assistance

[EvelynMidnight]

Hello all. I am new to this site. I have begun a series of erotic stories based on my own fantastical alter ego (a young stripper/college student named Samantha) who falls in lust with her hot new boss who has just gone through a nasty divorce. The stories thus far include some very playful BDSM, role reversal, and group sex (two women to one man).

I have three or four installments written, but am having some trouble filling in the spaces between the sex scenes, and trying to see the "big picture," i.e. where the story ought to go. I am very inexperienced in writing erotica, but would like to improve. I do have two advanced degrees, and my career (lawyer) involves quite a bit of writing (albeit very dry, legal writing). I mention this only to assure any editor working with me that I'm not a complete idiot, and that I'm willing to work hard where I've made a committment.

If an editor is interested in helping me out, please post.

Thank you!

 

[snooper]

Editor search

Usually this type of request gets the standard answer:

Click here and pick the one, or ones, which best suit your needs. They are supposed to reply in 72 hours.

Please don't pick me unless you have already mastered the use of a spell checker.

You, however have a much harder problem to solve. It almost sounds as though you really need a ghost writer.

Good luck.

 

[spyro1123]

Hi, i am a new author too. I am not positive that i can help, however, I am willing to give it a go. Helping people with plot problems was one of the things I really enjoyed in my writing classes. I am not the person to go to for grammar problems, i have spelling difficultys and commas are the bane of my existance, but i may be able to offer a new point of view and ideas for you.

Email me if you like at spyro1123@yahoo.com


PS
Snooper Smush is a perfectly common word in NC but your comment about it was cute

 

[licketysplit725]

Ghost writer? Ha! Guess that's why we're here.

 

[RHS71!]

would be happy to edit your story

Have always wanted to edit a <legal> opinion - seriously, if you'd like to give it a shot, I'll turn it around within 2-3 days...money back guarantee, of course!

 

[licketysplit725]

Evelyn,
I'll edit gratis, don't have to worry about a "money back guarantee"