New Hailey Jordan sketch

She looks too young for my comfort. I think you need to make some changes to make it clear she's over 18.
 
yeah... she looks really young...

nice drawing though! Her eyes kind of creep me out a little ^.^;
 
drksideofthemoon said:
Who's Hailey Jordan?

A character in an upcoming story I'm working on. Several people here pitched in and helped me name her. Slyc_Willie and RedHairedandFriendly ended up picking the names I chose. :D
 
There was a thread with AH'ers suggesting names for the slut in Flavo's next epic. Hailey Jordan was the, uh, winner.

Personally, I was relieved by your choice since the names of my wife, along with a daughter and granddaughter were among the also-rans.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:
 
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Rumple Foreskin said:
There was a thread with AH'ers suggesting names for the slut in Flavo's next epic. Hailey Jordan was the, uh, winner.

Personally, I felt relieved since the names of my wife, along with a daughter and granddaughter were nominated.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

LOL Yeah, the character 'Hailey' isn't the type any female would want to be associated with. :)
 
REALLY nice drawings! (though the youthful appearance is not my bag either).

I dig the forced perspective. har!
 
flavortang said:
LOL Yeah, the character 'Hailey' isn't the type any female would want to be associated with. :)
Can I rent her for a couple hours? :D
(But I have to say-- the apparent age bothers me likewise)
 
Stella_Omega said:
Can I rent her for a couple hours? :D
(But I have to say-- the apparent age bothers me likewise)

She's legal, fellas! lol Just because she doesn't have a huge ass and tits doesn't mean she's not legal. I like drawing females of varying body types. The main female character in my last story was a 'healthy' girl with lots of curves. Hailey's meant to be a little scrawny fuck-tease. :)
 
flavortang said:
She's legal, fellas! lol Just because she doesn't have a huge ass and tits doesn't mean she's not legal. I like drawing females of varying body types. The main female character in my last story was a 'healthy' girl with lots of curves. Hailey's meant to be a little scrawny fuck-tease. :)
Fuck-tease? She looks like she delivers what she promises-- no teasing there!
 
Stella_Omega said:
Fuck-tease? She looks like she delivers what she promises-- no teasing there!

True, lol. She teases heavily before putting out. The best type! I'll be doing more art of her soon, in color.
 
flavortang said:
She's legal, fellas! lol Just because she doesn't have a huge ass and tits doesn't mean she's not legal. I like drawing females of varying body types. The main female character in my last story was a 'healthy' girl with lots of curves. Hailey's meant to be a little scrawny fuck-tease. :)

That works for me. Her skankiness is an attempt to overcompensate for her own perceived lack of sensuality.....Carney (amateur shrink)
 
Carnevil9 said:
That works for me. Her skankiness is an attempt to overcompensate for her own perceived lack of sensuality.....Carney (amateur shrink)

Exactly. She's the town slut.
 
Excellent artwork, well done. I have to agree she looks a little young and relatively small in stature compared to her surroundings, not to mention the giant wang.
 
I thought it was Tina Hailey Jordan. ;) Can't leave off the Tina! lol

I like the drawings. You say she's 18, she's 18. She's a cartoon folks, not a real person. My former co-leader for scouts was 36 and a mother of four, but she had the body of a 12 year old. Some ladies just look young. I like the work, great stuff.
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
I thought it was Tina Hailey Jordan. ;) Can't leave off the Tina! lol

I like the drawings. You say she's 18, she's 18. She's a cartoon folks, not a real person. My former co-leader for scouts was 36 and a mother of four, but she had the body of a 12 year old. Some ladies just look young. I like the work, great stuff.

Thanks RH&F! Yeah, she's definitely legal, but I wanted to make her diminutive because she comes from a lower-middle class background and smokes and drinks more than she eats so she'd look malnourished and under-developed. My last two heroines were healthy, curvy girls so I wanted to go a different way this time.
 
Her eyes still freak me out.. I don't care how old she is o.0;;

Especially in #4 she looks... scarey o.o;;
 
I think it's the plaster on her knee and the lack of pubic hair that's misleading everyone, her face looks mature enough to be an 18 year old.

Image # 4 amuses me, though. I thought she was supposed to be sexually experienced, so why does she look so surprised to see all that semen? :D

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Yeah, she looks alright in the first two in spite of the schoolgirl costume she looks mature, the second two she definitley looks adolescent, particularly in the third one - not strictly illegal, but definitely sketchy - I dunno, maybe broaden her shoulders a bit - the larger eyes are a neotenic feature, maybe lightten up on the neoteny in the face: make her eyes a bit smaller and slightly higher, etc.

Solid technique though, good job with the expressions. You have other sequentials around here?
 
Vermilion said:
Image # 4 amuses me, though. I thought she was supposed to be sexually experienced, so why does she look so surprised to see all that semen? :D

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I was thinking the same thing. She looks too scared of that big cock too. :nana:

I don't think her eyes are scary at all. They just look like they're probably light blue.
 
tickledkitty said:
I was thinking the same thing. She looks too scared of that big cock too. :nana:

I don't think her eyes are scary at all. They just look like they're probably light blue.

Yeah, Kitty, they are light blue.

FYI to everyone else: LOL I'm not changing her appearance. Her look is the foundation of the story being written for her. Yes, she's supposed to have big eyes, a shaven puss-puss and a diminutive body. She's supposed to look dangerous, dangerously close to being underage(which she's not, definitely 18) to accentuate the amount of heinous sexual theatre she'll be subjecting herself to. :)
 
Chantilyvamp said:
flav she looks like a girl i went to school with which is rather amusing. :D

That... is awesome. lol

I'm sure there's lots of girls that look like her around. If I color any sketches of her, I'll give her red streaks in her hair.
 
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