IamTempted
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Hi
I am new here and new to writing fiction. My sister in law has been fulling my fantasies for sometime now and I've decided to live them out in fiction which is why I am here. I'm starting to write a new story and wonder what people think of the opening.
Any ideas on how to progress or general tips are most welcome.
I am new here and new to writing fiction. My sister in law has been fulling my fantasies for sometime now and I've decided to live them out in fiction which is why I am here. I'm starting to write a new story and wonder what people think of the opening.
Any ideas on how to progress or general tips are most welcome.
I didn’t always get on with Hannah, in fact for years I hated her with a passion. You see Hannah is the sister of my late wife and ever since we’ve dating she was a thorn in my side however all that changed after my Emma passed away.
I was 25 when Emma was taken from me and left alone to raise our little boy. Hannah had always been a good aunty and she loved my son as if he was her own. It was this that brought us together as she would come over every weekend to stay and spend time with her nephew.
Hannah is only 19, she not exactly what you’d call stunning, the covered up wrists and gothic clothing stop that, but she has something about her that can drive men to distraction. I often wondered if she knew how I felt and suspected deep down she did. It was the way she pretended not to notice me staring at her from across the living room when we were watching tv , God she knew.
My heart started pounding with guilt as I watched her. The shape of her chest, the curve of her breasts moved up and down as she breathed. I don’t care what anyone says, she is beautiful. Hannah has flowing dirty blond hair which covers her on show cleavage. The black almost see through blouse reveals her black laced lingerie whilst her skirt only just covered her things when her legs were crossed.