new great story that none of you bastards will add too. :)
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bungakawa2000
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lilguy
If I called you a "dipshit motherfucker
" once, you'd probably brush it off as friendly humor.
But seriously, after the 20th time or so, the "" no longer makes it funny.
Bunga
If I called you a "dipshit motherfucker
" once, you'd probably brush it off as friendly humor.But seriously, after the 20th time or so, the "
" no longer makes it funny.Bunga
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i had a look at the first thread a couple of days ago. It didn't look like a story more a notepad of ideas and a bit lazy. Why not start one b movie story and wriote it up. If it's good then maybe others will add to it.
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I don't think this looks like a very good story at all. While the "B" movie plot seems like an interesting idea on the surface, can anyone seriously point to a story on CHYOO that isn't of "B" movie quality or lower? I mean, we're not exactly Shakespearean around here.
This story strikes me as more of the creation of someone who had two or three ideas that he wasn't prepared to fully develop, and so thought he'd just write 'em down and see what came of them. I don't get the impression that he's really thought about any of these potential plots. Think about it: Anyone who expands on one of these choices is essentially writing the author's introduction for him. If I want to write a story based on a "B" movie plot and be the one who goes through the effort of creating the intro, I'll do it myself and get editor credit for the thing.
Also, his grammar and spelling skills are abyssmal, which speaks further volumes about the author's laziness. Quality? I don't see it. I see third- or fourth-grade writing skills, and we're not talking about the smarter kids in the class. Aren't we supposed to all be over eighteen here?
So I suppose I'm one of the smiling MOTHER FUCKERS who won't be contributing. I won't be leaving reviews either because I wouldn't have anything nice to say.
This story strikes me as more of the creation of someone who had two or three ideas that he wasn't prepared to fully develop, and so thought he'd just write 'em down and see what came of them. I don't get the impression that he's really thought about any of these potential plots. Think about it: Anyone who expands on one of these choices is essentially writing the author's introduction for him. If I want to write a story based on a "B" movie plot and be the one who goes through the effort of creating the intro, I'll do it myself and get editor credit for the thing.
Also, his grammar and spelling skills are abyssmal, which speaks further volumes about the author's laziness. Quality? I don't see it. I see third- or fourth-grade writing skills, and we're not talking about the smarter kids in the class. Aren't we supposed to all be over eighteen here?
So I suppose I'm one of the smiling MOTHER FUCKERS who won't be contributing. I won't be leaving reviews either because I wouldn't have anything nice to say.
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oh come on guys that mother fucker was clearly no bad intent. This the first time I ever did it.
actully wrote intros for all of them.
made multiple choices...just to add variety really. That why I didn't make one thread. Each has a story. Sense these aren't just my story really..but everyone.
about the grammer..you got me there.
actully wrote intros for all of them.
made multiple choices...just to add variety really. That why I didn't make one thread. Each has a story. Sense these aren't just my story really..but everyone.
about the grammer..you got me there.
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A good laugh!
Hello,
well I don't know about the rest of you, but I had a great laugh over this thread. From the thread title (Which I said, yeah I won't be adding to this one. I hate to say lilguy is right!) to the last post by lilguy.
And it isn't the first time you've insulted the other chyoo'ers by calling them vulgar names. Your whole way of going about gaining readers and contributions is stupid. If you want to go about it this way, just write the story down on paper and stick it in your... desk. Yeah, desk.
I have to agree with Gystex. I have NEVER been impressed by any story you've created, which there certainly is A LOT of them. Not to mention your alter egos. Including the one you DENY over and over, brownguy! I know it's you! Damnit! No other person could write like you.
And another thing, I gave you all the comments about the stupid Inga story. If you're going to waste my time telling me how great it is and to read it, then when it sucks you should expect to have me waste your time with my comments. It's only fair. Don't put something out there if you're not ready to accept the feedback.
Well no more mister niceguy... I am sorry lilguy, but I've been holding back over the last however long you've been a pain in the ass. I have been putting up with your crap for over a year now. Or so it feels like that long.
I am going to end this now, you FUCKER!
<-- look a smiley!
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
Hello,
well I don't know about the rest of you, but I had a great laugh over this thread. From the thread title (Which I said, yeah I won't be adding to this one. I hate to say lilguy is right!) to the last post by lilguy.
And it isn't the first time you've insulted the other chyoo'ers by calling them vulgar names. Your whole way of going about gaining readers and contributions is stupid. If you want to go about it this way, just write the story down on paper and stick it in your... desk. Yeah, desk.
I have to agree with Gystex. I have NEVER been impressed by any story you've created, which there certainly is A LOT of them. Not to mention your alter egos. Including the one you DENY over and over, brownguy! I know it's you! Damnit! No other person could write like you.
And another thing, I gave you all the comments about the stupid Inga story. If you're going to waste my time telling me how great it is and to read it, then when it sucks you should expect to have me waste your time with my comments. It's only fair. Don't put something out there if you're not ready to accept the feedback.
Well no more mister niceguy... I am sorry lilguy, but I've been holding back over the last however long you've been a pain in the ass. I have been putting up with your crap for over a year now. Or so it feels like that long.
I am going to end this now, you FUCKER!
<-- look a smiley!-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
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lilguy
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never
come on you admited to like Four Women of Gordor
and some threads I added to your story you admited to liking
Colleg girl to be
and the one where the guy had no memory
you gave all those comments well let see how CONSTRUTIVE those comment were
HOLY SHIT, another amazingly shitty thread.
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS? 55 words is not a thread, dumbass. Also, where's the question mark in the continuing question?
"first off this was clearly a thread leading to choice that you were talking about. It was he exit the cell..which way does he go. Each choice either lead to death or life after that...each choice leads to a totaly differnt outcome. But in order for that to happen the man has to exit the damm cell."
Pointless thread. Again, you show your knowledge of question marks.
well if you don't like it here...an idea... DON'T READ THE STORY. Instead you choose to give it a bunch of 1's bringing it down. When it got a lot of 3's and 5's. Maybe some people took it as the mindless story that it was suspose to be, I mean do the stories really ENRAGE you that much. Holding back...WHEN THE HELL have to held back. You all ways been on me for every little thing
I think if anything...I've BEEN the one holding back
but fuck it I'm gone
now I'm sorry if the thread was an insult..it really was meant as a joke...that was stupit of me. I admit it. But I'm not sorry to YOU.
If anyone want to take the stories as an Editor it up to them. Going to add some threads to my stories next week then it will end. This crap just not worth it.
come on you admited to like Four Women of Gordor
and some threads I added to your story you admited to liking
Colleg girl to be
and the one where the guy had no memory
you gave all those comments well let see how CONSTRUTIVE those comment were
HOLY SHIT, another amazingly shitty thread.
WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS? 55 words is not a thread, dumbass. Also, where's the question mark in the continuing question?
"first off this was clearly a thread leading to choice that you were talking about. It was he exit the cell..which way does he go. Each choice either lead to death or life after that...each choice leads to a totaly differnt outcome. But in order for that to happen the man has to exit the damm cell."
Pointless thread. Again, you show your knowledge of question marks.
well if you don't like it here...an idea... DON'T READ THE STORY. Instead you choose to give it a bunch of 1's bringing it down. When it got a lot of 3's and 5's. Maybe some people took it as the mindless story that it was suspose to be, I mean do the stories really ENRAGE you that much. Holding back...WHEN THE HELL have to held back. You all ways been on me for every little thing
I think if anything...I've BEEN the one holding back
but fuck it I'm gone
now I'm sorry if the thread was an insult..it really was meant as a joke...that was stupit of me. I admit it. But I'm not sorry to YOU.
If anyone want to take the stories as an Editor it up to them. Going to add some threads to my stories next week then it will end. This crap just not worth it.
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Chill Out Guys
I think everyone, especially Tim and Lilguy need to take a deep breath and calm down.
Tim if you don't like him don't talk to him, just ignore everything you think is crap and
Lilguy, you got to understand you are an unusual personality. You have some great ideas and some not so great, which could be said for everyone. I realize you are just trying to have fun which is what this is all about anyway.
Pointless flaming on the boards just takes away from the fun atmosphere here. I value you both of your approaches to Chyoo. Tim you are a good writer for these stories and your work shows careful thought and is generally interesting. Lilguy is creative in his approach, and lacks in his execution. I deal with it when he adds to my stories and I would prefer to have him there than not contributing.
Why can't why just let all different types enjoy themselves here without getting into personalities that really play no part here.
Have Fun!!!!
Thanks.
I think everyone, especially Tim and Lilguy need to take a deep breath and calm down.
Tim if you don't like him don't talk to him, just ignore everything you think is crap and
Lilguy, you got to understand you are an unusual personality. You have some great ideas and some not so great, which could be said for everyone. I realize you are just trying to have fun which is what this is all about anyway.
Pointless flaming on the boards just takes away from the fun atmosphere here. I value you both of your approaches to Chyoo. Tim you are a good writer for these stories and your work shows careful thought and is generally interesting. Lilguy is creative in his approach, and lacks in his execution. I deal with it when he adds to my stories and I would prefer to have him there than not contributing.
Why can't why just let all different types enjoy themselves here without getting into personalities that really play no part here.
Have Fun!!!!
Thanks.
bungakawa2000
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I'll try not to make this too lenghty... And 2nd person POV, assuming lilguy is still around...
You've got to understand that what pisses me (and possibly others) is the collection of many little things:
You have trouble spelling, you know you have trouble spelling, yet you are very reluctant to use tools that are there purposefully to help with spelling.
You brush off negative feedbacks just because they are negative, not wondering why you receive so many of them nor looking what is most commonly criticized.
You tout your horn with such insistance that it's no longer humorous, but obnoxious. It is beyond enthusiasm and closer to attention-hungering.
You call people names without any hint of subtelty that would indicate humor (unless you consider "" a licence to say anything you want), and even then, I doubt many of us would allow anybody to call them "bastards" and "motherfuckers" except, maybe, very close friends (NOT message board 'friends').
I think we all have weaknesses here. I know my own biggest is with the language itself. As an example, I realized a while back that I used the past continuous tense way too much and I'm working right now on reaching a better balance between past continuous and simple past. It's not easy, but I try to improve.
I'm fairly confident any other author here could pinpoint their own biggest weakness and tell how they are trying to improve. However, I haven't seen any desire nor effort on your part to do this, rather a tendency to discard criticism, both constructive and destructive, as nothing more than a petty attack against you. This, added to your beyond-humorous self-glorification (which is a relatively recent phenomenon, btw), caused me to react to your latest namecalling (which, as Tim pointed out, is not your first one).
With that said, I do not wish for anybody to quit over this argument. However, I expect you to realize criticism is not a matter of personnal attacks here. If it came to that, it's because nothing was done to correct past behaviors that irked readers and fellow boarders.
What Tim said was cruel, but it had to be said.
Bunga
You've got to understand that what pisses me (and possibly others) is the collection of many little things:
You have trouble spelling, you know you have trouble spelling, yet you are very reluctant to use tools that are there purposefully to help with spelling.
You brush off negative feedbacks just because they are negative, not wondering why you receive so many of them nor looking what is most commonly criticized.
You tout your horn with such insistance that it's no longer humorous, but obnoxious. It is beyond enthusiasm and closer to attention-hungering.
You call people names without any hint of subtelty that would indicate humor (unless you consider "
" a licence to say anything you want), and even then, I doubt many of us would allow anybody to call them "bastards" and "motherfuckers" except, maybe, very close friends (NOT message board 'friends').I think we all have weaknesses here. I know my own biggest is with the language itself. As an example, I realized a while back that I used the past continuous tense way too much and I'm working right now on reaching a better balance between past continuous and simple past. It's not easy, but I try to improve.
I'm fairly confident any other author here could pinpoint their own biggest weakness and tell how they are trying to improve. However, I haven't seen any desire nor effort on your part to do this, rather a tendency to discard criticism, both constructive and destructive, as nothing more than a petty attack against you. This, added to your beyond-humorous self-glorification (which is a relatively recent phenomenon, btw), caused me to react to your latest namecalling (which, as Tim pointed out, is not your first one).
With that said, I do not wish for anybody to quit over this argument. However, I expect you to realize criticism is not a matter of personnal attacks here. If it came to that, it's because nothing was done to correct past behaviors that irked readers and fellow boarders.
What Tim said was cruel, but it had to be said.
Bunga
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yea but most of the critcim just not construtive...it mostly fuck you
if I gave critcizim in the same manner no matter if I pointed out real erros..would you take as insults or not. How is not what he said an Attack. It basicly like YOU SUCK. you as me...suck as in attack. You suck. A you (me) Suck. personal...attack
also been trying.
Spell checking doesnt work because of microsoft words screw up everything when I paste it. I see all the words back ward. Some of the thread I write ARE spell check beleave it or not but they dont catch them all...like there..vs thier
The B movie story took me an entire HOUR to do and it was only 3 paragraphs. That how hard it is for me. I dont think you releaze how hard it is. It very...very hard. It not that I dont care. I just act like I don't so I wont get piss. I turn the other cheek a lot. More then I should. I'm sick of it. I know that little excuse because people still got to read through it
but face fact. I'm not a good writer. I suck
So why waste your time
it simply not fun for me anymore..its not. I get no joy out of it.
This is the LAST
comment I will make in this thread.
if I gave critcizim in the same manner no matter if I pointed out real erros..would you take as insults or not. How is not what he said an Attack. It basicly like YOU SUCK. you as me...suck as in attack. You suck. A you (me) Suck. personal...attack
also been trying.
Spell checking doesnt work because of microsoft words screw up everything when I paste it. I see all the words back ward. Some of the thread I write ARE spell check beleave it or not but they dont catch them all...like there..vs thier
The B movie story took me an entire HOUR to do and it was only 3 paragraphs. That how hard it is for me. I dont think you releaze how hard it is. It very...very hard. It not that I dont care. I just act like I don't so I wont get piss. I turn the other cheek a lot. More then I should. I'm sick of it. I know that little excuse because people still got to read through it
but face fact. I'm not a good writer. I suck
So why waste your time
it simply not fun for me anymore..its not. I get no joy out of it.
This is the LAST
comment I will make in this thread.
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Re: A good laugh!
I honestly didn't consider that this story was actually by lilguy - I just thought he'd found a similar author. If I had known it was him, I likely wouldn't have said anything. Lilguy already knows my opinion on his ability to write, and I see no real need to rub it in.
The only reason I even looked at this thread was because it had a catchy title. Well, I won't go for that one again. Lilguy, consider yourself permanently ignored. Writing badly is not such a crime, but your self-indulgent, whiny, egotistical attitude frankly pisses me off.
niceguy2002tim said:
I honestly didn't consider that this story was actually by lilguy - I just thought he'd found a similar author. If I had known it was him, I likely wouldn't have said anything. Lilguy already knows my opinion on his ability to write, and I see no real need to rub it in.
The only reason I even looked at this thread was because it had a catchy title. Well, I won't go for that one again. Lilguy, consider yourself permanently ignored. Writing badly is not such a crime, but your self-indulgent, whiny, egotistical attitude frankly pisses me off.
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ummm.... shit.
Well,
I am not sure if what I said achieved what I was hoping for. I definately wasn't looking to drive lilguy from Chyoo. Lilguy, the only prolem I really have with you is the lack of effort on your part. I admit I have read a lot of your stories. Mainly because of your posts in the forums claiming this time you have the BEST damn story ever. I guess I have just been looking for an improvement. And for your information, I did not only give Inga 1's. I did give a couple 2's and a few 3's. I could not bring myself to go higher than a 3.
I am not sure what is happening with your word cuting and pasting. Why things appear backwards. Spellcheck should be simple and easy to use. Perhaps you need a newer version of word? I don't know what to say about that.
I'd like to clear something up. My comments have never been a personal attack. I don't know you well enough to have anything he personal. And about the langauge of the comments, are you the only person who is allowed to say those kind of things?
Anyway, you can leave or you can stay. It's your choice. I would hope you're not going to cry over what I've said. I don't take any of it back. I may have said things harsher than needed, but so be it. Don't regret the things you do, just the things you don't do.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
Well,
I am not sure if what I said achieved what I was hoping for. I definately wasn't looking to drive lilguy from Chyoo. Lilguy, the only prolem I really have with you is the lack of effort on your part. I admit I have read a lot of your stories. Mainly because of your posts in the forums claiming this time you have the BEST damn story ever. I guess I have just been looking for an improvement. And for your information, I did not only give Inga 1's. I did give a couple 2's and a few 3's. I could not bring myself to go higher than a 3.
I am not sure what is happening with your word cuting and pasting. Why things appear backwards. Spellcheck should be simple and easy to use. Perhaps you need a newer version of word? I don't know what to say about that.
I'd like to clear something up. My comments have never been a personal attack. I don't know you well enough to have anything he personal. And about the langauge of the comments, are you the only person who is allowed to say those kind of things?
Anyway, you can leave or you can stay. It's your choice. I would hope you're not going to cry over what I've said. I don't take any of it back. I may have said things harsher than needed, but so be it. Don't regret the things you do, just the things you don't do.
-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
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I've been away for a week and a lot seems to have happened. I've just read your message about the editor rights to your stories in the other section Lilguy.
I'll be honest here I've never been a big fan of your work. I realise that you have some form of dyslexia but despite this the frequent spelling & grammar errors in your work puts me off it too much to want to read high amounts. Half the time it looks as if you've written it then posted immediatly without spellchecking it at all. The problem then is that if this an inherent problem within all of your posts regardless of quality of course it will put people off too much to want to read your work.
I've never read any of your stories for the above reason, I find it too hard to work through them most of the time. I've read a fair amount of the stuff you've written for other people. Despite the fact I'm not a big fan that doesn't mean your work is bad. There are plenty of published authors I can't stand the work of but that doesn't mean that they're bad.
In the main I tend to write without the care of other people's opinions. I like what I write and if just one person does that's good. But in the main I write for my own enjoyment and indulgence. My point is if you enjoying writing then fuck what other people think.
One last thing you're not motivate anyone to write for you by insulting them. If you do decide to leave it will be a pity as chyoo will be losing a good writer.
I'll be honest here I've never been a big fan of your work. I realise that you have some form of dyslexia but despite this the frequent spelling & grammar errors in your work puts me off it too much to want to read high amounts. Half the time it looks as if you've written it then posted immediatly without spellchecking it at all. The problem then is that if this an inherent problem within all of your posts regardless of quality of course it will put people off too much to want to read your work.
I've never read any of your stories for the above reason, I find it too hard to work through them most of the time. I've read a fair amount of the stuff you've written for other people. Despite the fact I'm not a big fan that doesn't mean your work is bad. There are plenty of published authors I can't stand the work of but that doesn't mean that they're bad.
In the main I tend to write without the care of other people's opinions. I like what I write and if just one person does that's good. But in the main I write for my own enjoyment and indulgence. My point is if you enjoying writing then fuck what other people think.
One last thing you're not motivate anyone to write for you by insulting them. If you do decide to leave it will be a pity as chyoo will be losing a good writer.
