KindredFlame
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If I am doing this wrong I apologise but I have this idea of a version of a harem story, this is what I have so far if anyone has any constructive comments? On how to spice it up as I am used to writing from my POV not as a narrator.
She entered the massive tent thinking she would find it sparse with an area for animals and a few camp beds and chairs but it was nothing like this there were beautiful carpets on the floor and cushions with women and men lounging around and at the furthest end was a large table enough to seat thirty around with a man in fine silks robes at the head of it. The man got up from his seat as the terrified woman approached the table. “So you are the emissary from the polish embassy?” He asked.
*
“Yes I have come to offer you the most humble apologies from the ambassador your royal eminence.” She said with a tremble in her voice. “Come don’t be afraid, no one here will harm you. May I offer you some wine.” She was told not to refuse anything from his eminence before leaving the embassy but not having ever been allowed to drink the local wines she didn’t realise how strong this was. She gulped down the drink as if it was a soda and his eminence refilled her glass and she drank that one.
*
Then it hit her like a sledgehammer, her head was spinning and then total blackness. When she awoke she was lying on a massive bed, no idea how she got there but everyone else just carried on about their business as if she wasn’t there. She tried to sit up but her head was still spinning then she realised she was naked and all there was to hide her embarrassment was the thin almost transparent sheet that slid down to her waist as she tried to sit up. “Oh you have awoken?” Said his eminence as he walked towards the bed where she was lying trying to cover her personal body parts with her hands and the sheet.*
*
“I had my wives undress you to make you more comfortable it gets hot here in that afternoon.” He said smiling at her in her embarrassment.*
*
“Do you want a boy to play with? Or one of my wives to get you ready for tonight?”
“Tonight? I have to go back to the embassy your eminence.”
“Oh no, your driver has left. You are my gift for the insult your government has bestowed on me by not presenting the ambassador on the first day of his tenancy. They know how much of an insult this is, so I will enjoy making you my new wife!”
*
“Get her ready for the marriage feast.” He ordered then four women came to my side taking me to an anti-room, hanging from a cross Beam was a large transparent bladder of creamy coloured liquid. “What’s that for?” She asked of her female captors.*
*
“Well it can be used in two ways both just as effective, I think it would be better if we go from the top until you get used to it.” With that a pair of padded hand cuffs were clamped around her wrist then the cuffs were placed over a hook that pulled her arms into the air.*
*
Then a tube was placed in her mouth she tried to resist but one woman opened her mouth and the tube was pushed into her mouth and down her throat Then a tap was turned on and the liquid started to empty and fill her little petite body filling her belly making it bulge as if she was pregnant. Then she realised what this was and it was not for refreshments as two of the women rolled a massive metal bowl to where her feet were.
*
“Step in.” She resisted but the women just grabbed her legs one at a time put them into the bowl placing her ankles in cuffs that were at either side of the bowl opening her legs ready for what was to happen next. An hour she was left stood there with the liquid filtering into her then without warning her body let go, from both her bottom and her pee hole the liquid started to flow out and into the massive bowl beneath her, though she was discussed with what was being done to her she felt quite refreshed after all the liquid had emptied from the bladder above her.
*
The women watched as she was emptied by the liquid she is ready now bath her and place her on the table to be dressed for the feast. She was taken down and placed in a bath of refreshing scented water and was washed by other women who were skilled in making her calm and exited at the same time, speaking softly to her as they gave her orgasm after orgasm from there touch knowing where her every pleasure centre was and knowing exactly how much pressure to apply to make her release her every inhibition forever.
*
She stepped out of the bath and stood in front of the women they dried her pale skin and oiled her body then they stretched her over a large cushion on her belly and started to massage oil into her rectum with one of the women pushing a well-oiled finger deep into her anus, this made her jump a little but she soon became accustomed to it and felt disappointed when it was removed.
*
The women then led her naked back to the large room and placed her on the table in the very centre of the table. She was splayed out and told to relax and just allow things to happen naturally or this night could become her last, then she felt a needle go into her neck and in seconds she found she was unable to move but she could see and feel and hear
*
The other women stripped naked and took up positions under the table then the boys that also were there when she came in and filled in the empty places under the table until each seat had someone man or woman under it. Then food was brought in and was placed around the polish woman and she became the centre piece of the display.
*
On her belly there were strips of food placed around her breasts there was other morsels, her hands that were place upwards had grapes hanging from them and gradually her entire body was cover in food there was a small apple pushed into her mouth and something similar place at the lips of her virgin vagina, and finally her oiled anus had something that resembled a small banana was inserted deep into it.
*
Then there was lots of activity she could feel that there was a lot of commotion around her then it all fell silent, there some words spoken in some Arabic language then the feast began. There was shouting and grabbing of food from around her body, it was not long before she was totally uncovered once more. Her mouth was now open since the apple had been removed and she could feel her labia being touched by multiple hands.
*
The only thing left was the object that was stuffed up her anus this remained there, gradually she found she was able to move her head as she did she saw every seat filled with a man, each of them seemed to be in some state of ecstasy then one man would groan, then get up and pull whoever was pleasuring him out from under the table and take them away and continue with their sexual adventures in another part of the tent.
She entered the massive tent thinking she would find it sparse with an area for animals and a few camp beds and chairs but it was nothing like this there were beautiful carpets on the floor and cushions with women and men lounging around and at the furthest end was a large table enough to seat thirty around with a man in fine silks robes at the head of it. The man got up from his seat as the terrified woman approached the table. “So you are the emissary from the polish embassy?” He asked.
*
“Yes I have come to offer you the most humble apologies from the ambassador your royal eminence.” She said with a tremble in her voice. “Come don’t be afraid, no one here will harm you. May I offer you some wine.” She was told not to refuse anything from his eminence before leaving the embassy but not having ever been allowed to drink the local wines she didn’t realise how strong this was. She gulped down the drink as if it was a soda and his eminence refilled her glass and she drank that one.
*
Then it hit her like a sledgehammer, her head was spinning and then total blackness. When she awoke she was lying on a massive bed, no idea how she got there but everyone else just carried on about their business as if she wasn’t there. She tried to sit up but her head was still spinning then she realised she was naked and all there was to hide her embarrassment was the thin almost transparent sheet that slid down to her waist as she tried to sit up. “Oh you have awoken?” Said his eminence as he walked towards the bed where she was lying trying to cover her personal body parts with her hands and the sheet.*
*
“I had my wives undress you to make you more comfortable it gets hot here in that afternoon.” He said smiling at her in her embarrassment.*
*
“Do you want a boy to play with? Or one of my wives to get you ready for tonight?”
“Tonight? I have to go back to the embassy your eminence.”
“Oh no, your driver has left. You are my gift for the insult your government has bestowed on me by not presenting the ambassador on the first day of his tenancy. They know how much of an insult this is, so I will enjoy making you my new wife!”
*
“Get her ready for the marriage feast.” He ordered then four women came to my side taking me to an anti-room, hanging from a cross Beam was a large transparent bladder of creamy coloured liquid. “What’s that for?” She asked of her female captors.*
*
“Well it can be used in two ways both just as effective, I think it would be better if we go from the top until you get used to it.” With that a pair of padded hand cuffs were clamped around her wrist then the cuffs were placed over a hook that pulled her arms into the air.*
*
Then a tube was placed in her mouth she tried to resist but one woman opened her mouth and the tube was pushed into her mouth and down her throat Then a tap was turned on and the liquid started to empty and fill her little petite body filling her belly making it bulge as if she was pregnant. Then she realised what this was and it was not for refreshments as two of the women rolled a massive metal bowl to where her feet were.
*
“Step in.” She resisted but the women just grabbed her legs one at a time put them into the bowl placing her ankles in cuffs that were at either side of the bowl opening her legs ready for what was to happen next. An hour she was left stood there with the liquid filtering into her then without warning her body let go, from both her bottom and her pee hole the liquid started to flow out and into the massive bowl beneath her, though she was discussed with what was being done to her she felt quite refreshed after all the liquid had emptied from the bladder above her.
*
The women watched as she was emptied by the liquid she is ready now bath her and place her on the table to be dressed for the feast. She was taken down and placed in a bath of refreshing scented water and was washed by other women who were skilled in making her calm and exited at the same time, speaking softly to her as they gave her orgasm after orgasm from there touch knowing where her every pleasure centre was and knowing exactly how much pressure to apply to make her release her every inhibition forever.
*
She stepped out of the bath and stood in front of the women they dried her pale skin and oiled her body then they stretched her over a large cushion on her belly and started to massage oil into her rectum with one of the women pushing a well-oiled finger deep into her anus, this made her jump a little but she soon became accustomed to it and felt disappointed when it was removed.
*
The women then led her naked back to the large room and placed her on the table in the very centre of the table. She was splayed out and told to relax and just allow things to happen naturally or this night could become her last, then she felt a needle go into her neck and in seconds she found she was unable to move but she could see and feel and hear
*
The other women stripped naked and took up positions under the table then the boys that also were there when she came in and filled in the empty places under the table until each seat had someone man or woman under it. Then food was brought in and was placed around the polish woman and she became the centre piece of the display.
*
On her belly there were strips of food placed around her breasts there was other morsels, her hands that were place upwards had grapes hanging from them and gradually her entire body was cover in food there was a small apple pushed into her mouth and something similar place at the lips of her virgin vagina, and finally her oiled anus had something that resembled a small banana was inserted deep into it.
*
Then there was lots of activity she could feel that there was a lot of commotion around her then it all fell silent, there some words spoken in some Arabic language then the feast began. There was shouting and grabbing of food from around her body, it was not long before she was totally uncovered once more. Her mouth was now open since the apple had been removed and she could feel her labia being touched by multiple hands.
*
The only thing left was the object that was stuffed up her anus this remained there, gradually she found she was able to move her head as she did she saw every seat filled with a man, each of them seemed to be in some state of ecstasy then one man would groan, then get up and pull whoever was pleasuring him out from under the table and take them away and continue with their sexual adventures in another part of the tent.