I've written some stories. They need to be edited. English isn't my native language, and I think that there could be some funny expressions or mistakes in the stories.
The stories are about a young woman, manipulation the men around her for her amusement and her advantage. They are in th "non consent/reluctant" section, strictly femdom, some have elements of fetish or BDSM.
I've asked about 15 editors, but no one seems to be interested.
The first 3 stories are allready finished. I'm writing on the fourth story right now.
Is there somebody her, willing to help me?
Thanks
LrseFauc
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Karen - his new girlfriend?
She was the most beautiful woman in high school, Ken thought. He was drooling over her since the first time he had seen her. An angelic face, long legs, firm, flat tummy, her breasts had just the right size not to big, not small. In reality he hadn't seen her breasts, but he had a good imagination. She was a very popular girl at school.
On opposite Ken wasn't popular. He was nerdy, skinny and short spoken in company. He didn't thought, that this pretty woman had even recognized him. When he greeted her, she hadn't greeted back. It seemed that he was invisibly for her.
He often tried to be near her, but even if she didn't see him, he got a lot so see and to dream of. He find her incredible sexy and he liked it very much, that she was self-confident and seemed to know that she was a beauty. She mostly wore sexy clothes, belly tops, hot pants or short skirts or tops with plunging necklines or sleeveless tops. She looked great in everything she wear, Ken thought. But he was not in her league, and so he didn't wonder that he wasn't noticed by her.
He was caught off guard, when she spoke to him at the floor.
„Hi Ken, how are you?” She asked, while she placed herself in front of him.
„Uuuh, I, fine! Thank you!” Ken answered.
She neared Ken and stood now very close to him. Ken could smell her perfume. She was a couple of centimeters taller than him. Ken was intimidated.
Karen examined him carefully.
„Are you okay? You seem to be nervous.” Karen detected.
Ken begun to sweat: „Y yes, everything is okay.”
With an amusement smile on her face she observed Kens face.
„It's hot here, isn't it? I want you to ask: what are you doing this afternoon?”
Karen asked with a probing look at her face.
„I, I don't know. I, I - perhaps homework?” Ken stammered.
„I want to meet you this afternoon. I'll see you at 2 pm at my house, okay?” Karen asked.
„O okay!” Ken replied.
Karen stood a few moments longer close to Ken, with her hands on her hips without saying a word. Ken felt like shrinking in front of her chest.
Then Karen turned to go: „See you!”
Ken hadn't had time to realize really what happened, it was so fast. He just kept standing at this place. In recall he gasped and his cock got hard. What did she want from him? He flew to the restroom to wait his now obvious erection to subside. It took a time till he left the restroom. He tried to catch a view of her again the whole morning, but he didn't see her again.
***
Nervously he arrived at her place. He was 10 minutes early and he went back and forth in the nearby before he went to the door and rang the bell.
A long time nothing happened. It was still quiet behind the front door. Perhaps she was kidding him. He wouldn't be very surprised. He couldn't imagine, why she wanted to meet him. Kens anger begun to grow. How foolish it was, that he was here! How could he thought about a meeting with Karen? She was kidding him.
Before he turned to left, he decided to ring again. Just before he rang, he heard her voice from inside the house:
„Sorry and just one moment please. I came just of the shower and I'm naked and wet in the
moment and going to dress.”
The picture of a wet an naked Karen caused his cock to jump to an erection. Damn, he thought. How could he have a normal meeting with her, when his cock has his own life? He tried to calm down and tried to think of some boring things. And of course, it worked a little bit.
Some minutes later, she opened the door.
...
The stories are about a young woman, manipulation the men around her for her amusement and her advantage. They are in th "non consent/reluctant" section, strictly femdom, some have elements of fetish or BDSM.
I've asked about 15 editors, but no one seems to be interested.
The first 3 stories are allready finished. I'm writing on the fourth story right now.
Is there somebody her, willing to help me?
Thanks
LrseFauc
_______________
Karen - his new girlfriend?
She was the most beautiful woman in high school, Ken thought. He was drooling over her since the first time he had seen her. An angelic face, long legs, firm, flat tummy, her breasts had just the right size not to big, not small. In reality he hadn't seen her breasts, but he had a good imagination. She was a very popular girl at school.
On opposite Ken wasn't popular. He was nerdy, skinny and short spoken in company. He didn't thought, that this pretty woman had even recognized him. When he greeted her, she hadn't greeted back. It seemed that he was invisibly for her.
He often tried to be near her, but even if she didn't see him, he got a lot so see and to dream of. He find her incredible sexy and he liked it very much, that she was self-confident and seemed to know that she was a beauty. She mostly wore sexy clothes, belly tops, hot pants or short skirts or tops with plunging necklines or sleeveless tops. She looked great in everything she wear, Ken thought. But he was not in her league, and so he didn't wonder that he wasn't noticed by her.
He was caught off guard, when she spoke to him at the floor.
„Hi Ken, how are you?” She asked, while she placed herself in front of him.
„Uuuh, I, fine! Thank you!” Ken answered.
She neared Ken and stood now very close to him. Ken could smell her perfume. She was a couple of centimeters taller than him. Ken was intimidated.
Karen examined him carefully.
„Are you okay? You seem to be nervous.” Karen detected.
Ken begun to sweat: „Y yes, everything is okay.”
With an amusement smile on her face she observed Kens face.
„It's hot here, isn't it? I want you to ask: what are you doing this afternoon?”
Karen asked with a probing look at her face.
„I, I don't know. I, I - perhaps homework?” Ken stammered.
„I want to meet you this afternoon. I'll see you at 2 pm at my house, okay?” Karen asked.
„O okay!” Ken replied.
Karen stood a few moments longer close to Ken, with her hands on her hips without saying a word. Ken felt like shrinking in front of her chest.
Then Karen turned to go: „See you!”
Ken hadn't had time to realize really what happened, it was so fast. He just kept standing at this place. In recall he gasped and his cock got hard. What did she want from him? He flew to the restroom to wait his now obvious erection to subside. It took a time till he left the restroom. He tried to catch a view of her again the whole morning, but he didn't see her again.
***
Nervously he arrived at her place. He was 10 minutes early and he went back and forth in the nearby before he went to the door and rang the bell.
A long time nothing happened. It was still quiet behind the front door. Perhaps she was kidding him. He wouldn't be very surprised. He couldn't imagine, why she wanted to meet him. Kens anger begun to grow. How foolish it was, that he was here! How could he thought about a meeting with Karen? She was kidding him.
Before he turned to left, he decided to ring again. Just before he rang, he heard her voice from inside the house:
„Sorry and just one moment please. I came just of the shower and I'm naked and wet in the
moment and going to dress.”
The picture of a wet an naked Karen caused his cock to jump to an erection. Damn, he thought. How could he have a normal meeting with her, when his cock has his own life? He tried to calm down and tried to think of some boring things. And of course, it worked a little bit.
Some minutes later, she opened the door.
...
