New Fanfic: X-Men Hellfire

[SonTenks]

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4346

I've started it off, but it could really use a couple of pushes. It starts in the X-Men universe, but could easily be pushed into the general Marvel 'verse. To be perfectly honest, I'd be really happy if you just read it and gave me some feedback. Thanks in advance, and Merry Christmas.

 

[Zingiber]

In this thread you'll want to make a minor mechanical correction from {first_name} to {FIRST_NAME}, since substitution is case sensitive. If you do this, you'll also need to change the story options to make it immersive and prompt for a first and last name.

You might also want to promote the mind control theme of your story in this forum to pique the interest of MC fans, though it sounds like it will be somewhat more subtle and plot-related than the usual MC story.

Happy writing!

-Z