New erotica writer

[CathyRose]

Hi folks,

I've been hanging around the site for a few weeks now, and I just submitted my first story (Ruby's interview) *grin*

Please let me know what you think of it - honest answers please, I can take it - lol)

I am in the middle of writing another one, anything anyone can suggest to help improve my skills would be much appreciated.

Thanks,

Cathy

 

[nitengale]

The link to Cathy's story...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12295

 

[CathyRose]

Thank you nightengale - I was just trying to work out how to do that!

Cathy

 

[LordMagicMan]

Very well written. I enjoyed it

 

[Glenn Beuhring]

Great Story

I really liked your story. Bi-women are so sexy

 

[CathyRose]

Thank you Magicman and Glenn, it's good to be appreciated.

Cathy Rose

 

[Debbie]

what I thought

Pretty damn good i thought, good writing very sexy and maybe the story leads on to another?

 

[Ulyssa]

Ruby's Interview

You have mail. Positive criticism.

 

[CathyRose]

Thanks everyone *blush*

Cathy

 

[Born Free]

I agree fantastic story can't wait to read your next

I'm wondering if this is a true story or not

 

[Born Free]

Sorry bout the bad smilely but i'm knew to this

 

[CathyRose]

Thank you born free - don't worry about the smiley - I'm new as well

Is it true?

Well, that's for me to know and you to wonder *grin*

Cathy

 

[Lancastrian]

Cathy....
Hello. This was an unusual story in that the teller was writing in the first person, and relating another storytellers words, whilst getting the hots for her!
I enjoyed that aspect of it. I also have a sneaking feeling that Sarah and Ruby are real people, maybe known to you.(?). If that's not the case then take it as a compliment to your writing skills.
The passage where Ruby and Sarah kiss is particularly good.
I've attended scores of job interviews but they were never quite like that one, sadly.
I must be in the wrong industry!!

Well done. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Lancastrian

 

[CathyRose]

Thank you Lancastrian!

Positive feedback is really inspiring!

Cathy Rose

 

[Babbs]

I really enjoyed reading your first story. It was sexy...erotic...ok, it turned me on! I hope there will be more to come. You have skills girlfriend.

Love Babbs

 

[CathyRose]

Babbs - It turned me on writing it too

Thanks for the feedback everyone!

CathyRose

 

[Violette]

Congrats to CathyRose!

Just read your story, and girl, I have to tell you...it was FABULOUS! I love how the spoken fantasy envelops the ladies into a gloriously orgasmic moment all their own! Please keep the stories coming, and think about writing a part two for this one!

 

[CathyRose]

Hi Violette,

I am just about to submit another story - its from a different angle though *grin*

Next, I think I will work on another Ruby and Sarah

I am so glad you enjoyed it,

CathyRose

 

[CAT~~]

I thought it was a very fun story to read. And enjoyed it very much. Looking forward to more of your stories.
Cat~~

 

[CathyRose]

Thank you Cat - sorry I haven't replied before, I've been a bit rushed over here. My new story is up now, it's called 'a dream come true - tom's fantasy fulfilled'....

You know, it really is good to get all this positive feedback - very motivating.

Thank you every body,

CathyRose

 

[The_old_man]

Just read both of your stories (my wife leaning over my sholder) and will now wash out my shorts. Keep writing.

 

[Babbs]

Can't find your new story.....

Hi Cathy, I tried to find your new story. It must be hiding somewhere. Dying to read it! Could you put a link to it in here?
Thanx
Hugs,
Babbs

 

[KimberToo]

Loved it!!

I loved your story! It was so vivid the taste of pussy lingers in my mind just thinking about it!!!


KimberToo

 

[CathyRose]

Hi Babbs - this is the first time I've tried doing a link - so I hope it works

http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=13345 A Dream Come True - Tom's Fantasy Fulfilled

Thanks every one!

CathyRose

 

[Sonia_de_Beaumanoir]

I read both

I read both of your stories, and in my opinion the second (about Tom) was much the better.

My problem with the first (Ruby's Interview) was that it was so improbable I couldn't get into the sex parts. If you could have come up with some "trick" explanation as to why an interview should turn into an orgy, then I could buy into it easier.

That being said, the writing style is very good in both, and even better in the second.