CandiCame
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Hey, so I was on here before asking why my stories kept getting low ratings! People were really nice about helping me, someone even offered to edit for me and did a fabulous job!
I was wondering if you all would care to look at my latest chapter and see if they've gotten better! I tried really hard to cut out all the confusing stuff, and though I didn't switch the third person, I think it turned out a little better!
Woo- it's 7:00am and I'm feeling good about today!
http://www.literotica.com/s/xaxac-brigadon-and-knights-of-order-ch-04
I was wondering if you all would care to look at my latest chapter and see if they've gotten better! I tried really hard to cut out all the confusing stuff, and though I didn't switch the third person, I think it turned out a little better!
Woo- it's 7:00am and I'm feeling good about today!
http://www.literotica.com/s/xaxac-brigadon-and-knights-of-order-ch-04
