Hello everyone! I've been gone for quite a while but now I'm back and writing again. I would really appreciate any feedback for my latest chapter in my ongoing incest series. I think my writing has improved since my last chapter but I'm curious what you all think. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thanks.
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