Excellent piece of work, Billy. I'm running out of adjectives now, so I'll stop. lol. It was outstanding. The mood, the pace, the detail. What more can I say. I long since fell in love with your characters, but now it seems to have deepened more. Especially the concern that Bruce has for Jonathan's mental health. A very good plus in his corner from me, if I must say so.
Do you think Bruce would mind if I borrow his steering wheel, and Tony, his handcuffs? lol.