New Challenge Proposal

[Guest]

I propose a play on the words Easy Rider.

Breezy Rider
Cheesy Rider
Freezy Rider
Greasy Rider
Hazy Rider
Jazzy Rider
Kneesy Rider
Lazy Rider
Over-easy Rider
Queasy Rider
Wheezy Rider

A few ideas.

Deadline - Sunday May 1st.
Posting - in this thread then submitted if desired.
Prize - the pleasure you give others with your inventive and fantastic poem.

No judging, no competition. Just have fun.

 

[flyguy69]

I propose a play on the words Easy Rider.

Breezy Rider
Cheesy Rider
Freezy Rider
Greasy Rider
Hazy Rider
Jazzy Rider
Kneesy Rider
Lazy Rider
Over-easy Rider
Queasy Rider
Wheezy Rider

A few ideas.

Deadline - Sunday May 1st.
Posting - in this thread then submitted if desired.
Prize - the pleasure you give others with your inventive and fantastic poem.

No judging, no competition. Just have fun.

Looking at your av inspires this one:
Please, T, wider!

 

[Guest]

Looking at your av inspires this one:
Please, T, wider!

This would be a a play on her Kneesy Rider?

 

[flyguy69]

This would be a play on her Kneesy Rider?

Can you think of a nicer place to play? What do you say, Tess?

 

[wildsweetone]

I propose a play on the words Easy Rider.

Breezy Rider
Cheesy Rider
Freezy Rider
Greasy Rider
Hazy Rider
Jazzy Rider
Kneesy Rider
Lazy Rider
Over-easy Rider
Queasy Rider
Wheezy Rider

A few ideas.

Deadline - Sunday May 1st.
Posting - in this thread then submitted if desired.
Prize - the pleasure you give others with your inventive and fantastic poem.

No judging, no competition. Just have fun.

What? No SNEEZY Rider?

Is there any form for this or does anything go?

 

[flyguy69]

What? No SNEEZY Rider?

Is there any form for this or does anything go?

And I suppose you're Snow White?

 

[wildsweetone]

I do try.

 

[Angeline]

This would be a a play on her Kneesy Rider?

which rhymes with Cheesy Rider...

 

[Angeline]

And I suppose you're Snow White?

You know the eighth dwarf was Sleazy. You knew that, right?

Ok, PoeTess. I'm done hijacking your thread. I'm in.

 

[BooMerengue]

"He'z my Rider"?

Why is Paperback Writer zinging around my head?

May 1st is too long...

 

[Angeline]

"He'z my Rider"?

Why is Paperback Writer zinging around my head?

May 1st is too long...

cause it's a good song?

 

[bluerains]

you

have captured my thoughts...count me in....blue

 

[BooMerengue]

cause it's a good song?

Or cuz my brain is cooked?

Were ee's ears burning last night? It's late and I'm reading this great book, Empire Falls by Richard Russo, and theres a character in there that reminds me of Grub anyway, and I got to this scene that so cracked me up that I was afraid to try to continue reading I was laughing so hard.

Thanks for your comments this am. Those are definitely not my best, but I had to post them to get them in here so I could store them. Now how's that for a dumb excuse for shite writing? LOL

 

[Angeline]

Or cuz my brain is cooked?

Were ee's ears burning last night? It's late and I'm reading this great book, Empire Falls by Richard Russo, and theres a character in there that reminds me of Grub anyway, and I got to this scene that so cracked me up that I was afraid to try to continue reading I was laughing so hard.

Thanks for your comments this am. Those are definitely not my best, but I had to post them to get them in here so I could store them. Now how's that for a dumb excuse for shite writing? LOL

I thought the free verse one was the better of the two, but the sonnet was quite good. I wasn't wild about the last two lines because the rest of the poem has an insightful, dreamy quality and then you went for humor. Change the last two lines imho.

And I'll ask whathiseyez about his earzs.

So, Tess? Am I good about keeping my nonhijacking promises or what?

 

[Guest]

Looking at your av inspires this one:

I aim to please.


(notice I edited your quote)

 

[Guest]

This would be a a play on her Kneesy Rider?

This means you have to repeat Anatomy 101.

 

[Guest]

Can you think of a nicer place to play? What do you say, Tess?

Tess is speechless! Speechless, I say!

What? No SNEEZY Rider?

Is there any form for this or does anything go?

I only suggested a few that came immediately to mind. If you can think of your own invention, go ahead.


As Cole Porter once wrote - anything goes.

 

[Guest]

You know the eighth dwarf was Sleazy. You knew that, right?

Ok, PoeTess. I'm done hijacking your thread. I'm in.

My threads are only here for you to hijack, particularly if your in.

 

[Guest]

"He'z my Rider"?

Why is Paperback Writer zinging around my head?

May 1st is too long...

Post whenever you're ready - May 1st is the deadline. (I need it to stop me from procrastinating)


The only rule I insist on is that the last word in your title be Rider so forget about anything else, sorry.

 

[Guest]

have captured my thoughts...count me in....blue

*dancing the nana tango*

 

[My Erotic Tale]

I will do ...'breezey rider'

rider in the buff <grin>

 

[Guest]

I will do ...'breezey rider'

rider in the buff <grin>

As long as you're steering.



Glad you're joining in MET.

 

[wildsweetone]

I will do ...'breezey rider'

rider in the buff <grin>

I guess that means he won't be wearing a helmet.


Talk about dangerous riding.

 

[Guest]

Notice - Ruling revision.


Titles may also have variations of the word "rider" as in "writer", "sider", "lighter", etc.

Deadline May 1st but post here anytime - for those whose muse serves them well.

 

[Man Ray]

This sounds like fun...

This sounds like fun! I've always wanted to write a poem with the title `Bareback Rider` so here goes! Count me in!