New Author with - you guessed it - a story!

[EvieRoak]

Hello there! I've been writing erotica for my own entertainment and exploration since, well, since I started thinking about naughty things. After some prodding from my two dedicated readers/friends, I decided to post one of my less personal stories here.

I'd love some thoughts and reviews, if you have the time. Here is the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=377248

Also, I am wondering how much stock I should put in the rating system. What would you consider 'good'?

Thanks,
Evie R.

 

[tickledkitty]

Hello there! I've been writing erotica for my own entertainment and exploration since, well, since I started thinking about naughty things. After some prodding from my two dedicated readers/friends, I decided to post one of my less personal stories here.

I'd love some thoughts and reviews, if you have the time. Here is the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=377248

Also, I am wondering how much stock I should put in the rating system. What would you consider 'good'?

Thanks,
Evie R.

Welcome.

You might have better luck with this on the Story Feedback Forum. I'd say anything over a 4 is good, although at 4.5 and 10 votes you get the coveted H.

 

[rgraham666]

Welcome to the AH.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Welcome and good luck.

I took a look at your story...didn't read the whole thing and you may want to have one of the volunteer editors take a look before you post. I saw several little errors within the first two paragraphs.

Missing words or one to many words causes a reader to have to stop and think about what you might be trying to say thus ruining the reading experience.

Just my thoughts. It did look like a good story other than that.

Good luck.

 

[Anna_Malia75]

Welcome to the AH. I left you some comments in the Story Feedback Forum!

 

[_Lynn_]

Welcome to the AH

 

[glynndah]

A welcome for the little newbie from the good little witch.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Hi, Evie. Welcome to Literotica and to the AH in particular. I started to read your story, but it was in the first person, present tense, which I find confusing. I did notice a tense change in the first sentence.

I will probably read it and comment later.