new author, shameless plug...

[sucking_her_toes]

Hi all

I've been a big fan of Literotica for a quite a few years but this is my first visit to the forums - pleased to make your acquaintance

Just like to give myself a shameless plug and say that I had my first story published on this fine website today. Its called 'Servant To Her Desire' and is listed in the BDSM category - though as I was writing it, it could just as easily have been an erotic coupling. But it is definitely a story of submission and includes bondage so I figured BDSM would be more appropriate for readers to know what to expect.

Any comments/opinions welcomed.

Thanks for your time!

 

[Vermilion]

Add in a link...?
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V

 

[sucking_her_toes]

Aha, immediately a truly fine suggestion! lol

Thanks V.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=294735

 

[TxRad]

Erotic Coupling is a catch all category so anytime you can fit your story somewhere else you're ahead of the game..... If the powers that be don't agree they'll move it where they think it fits best....

Welcome by the way... and have fun, we certainly will....


ETA: and since this is a shameless plug thread, you might check out a few of my BDSM stories while you're at it.....

 

[mjl2010]

OK nicely written. Another story not my taste. But well done. I voted.

MJL

 

[mjl2010]

Btw

By the way, welcome, I'm rather new myself.

These folks are brutal teasers.

They see "virgin" and lick their lips.

Have fun and enjoy.

MJL

 

[TxRad]

By the way, welcome, I'm rather new myself.

These folks are brutal teasers.

They see "virgin" and lick their lips.

Have fun and enjoy.

MJL

Hey brutal is a little harsh..... But pretty damned close...

Anyway virginity is so short around here that we have to hurry or it'll be long gone....

 

[Vermilion]

Voted and commented.
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V

 

[mjl2010]

Hey brutal is a little harsh..... But pretty damned close...

Anyway virginity is so short around here that we have to hurry or it'll be long gone....

Got to tease back a little

MJL

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

We are never brutal. We may use whips and a rack occasionally, but never brutal

Welcum, btw. Don't believe everything you hear and trust no one

 

[sucking_her_toes]

Thanks all for the welcome, and for the comment V.

The story is a written account of a fantasy I shared with my girlfriend which ironically *was* part of foreplay between us (as my ID indicates - I too enjoy a lot of foreplay), and she suggested I write it out.

Also, in case anyone wonders, the complete lack of names/physical descriptions was also intentional - my reason being that anyone reading would have an easier time visualising themselves in either role, if they so desired.

 

[TxRad]

Not a bad first submission....

An editor might have helped on the couple of rough spots but all in all, not bad....

 

[lipsofanangel]

If we're shamlessly plugging, I want to join in! See the links in my signature (the top one especially)!