"New" author seeking editor - Tricked/Seduced/Revenge Loving Wives story(s)

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I've written only a few things in the past for Literotica, under the user name Thabes. Recently, I got talking with StangStar06 a bit because I just love how thought out and complete his stories are. So, I switched gears and have started focusing on what I consider makes him successful as an author, trying to incorporate that within my own stories.

I'd like to find an editor to review, proof, and offer comments on my upcoming stories. I realize I may have quite a bit to improve upon and am open to honest criticism and critique. It's been a few years since I last contributed, but I have 5 or 6 longer stories started (part 1 of my first I'll post is currently at 14,860 words, but unedited), and a dozen or more current ideas for new. I also catch myself using the same stupid adjectives and verbs over and over again, like softly, gently, rubbed, caressed, blah blah blah. I try to catch them, and switch them, but I miss a lot. Another flaw of mine is the dialog. I tend to use the whole "he/she [said, stated, confirmed, offered, etc.]." far too often when starting dialog. I'm open to any comments to push me over that hurdle. (I don't remember having that issue in college.)

If you have the time to share with me as a serious editor, I'd really appreciate hearing from you!

Oh, I never use Whilst or Amongst in my writing, if that helps.

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