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suziboy

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I've just submitted the first part of my first story and I've just finished writing the second. I just wanted to get some general feedback and especially some opinions on what to do next. My character is going to get a makeover to turn him into his boss's 'female' secretary but I'm a bit unsure about who to give it to him. I'm thinking about eiter Laveroc's ex-wife (early 50s/late 40s), his older female colleague (the same), or his younger female colleague (probably mid or late 20s). I'm not sure which would work best. Any thoughts wouldbe appreciated, stories below. Thanks!

A new 'girl' in the office : Part 1

I’d been working in an office since I’d finished college until I could get myself a ‘real’ job. Basically I was a secretary for some of the bigger bosses in the company; nothing exciting but it paid the bills. Although it was what a lot of people saw as ‘a girl’s job’ I really enjoyed it, especially chatting to the other secretaries who were all older women. I was a 21 year old guy, mostly into girls but I’d never had a serious relationship that lasted more than a few months. I’d also had a couple of drunken one night stands with men that I’d met on chatrooms. Something that I had enjoyed but always felt a bit guilty about; I saw myself a straight although I’d fantasised a lot about sucking guys off, and even about being a ‘girl’. I’d had long hair for quite a few years and I suppose could be described as quite feminine, especially since I had well developed, C cup breasts that I hid away, except from one guy I had a one night stand with. I’d also experimented with dressing up, although nobody knew my secret. However there were about to be big changes in my life that would see me exploring my feminine side in ways that I never dreamed would happen.

It all began when a new manager started overseeing my office a couple of days a week. He was an older man, in his early fifties but very striking. Around six feet tall with a body that looked trim and powerful under his pinstripe suit, he had dashes of grey in his dark hair and piercing blue eyes. Since I’d started working I’d begun to become more interested in guys and this man captured my attention immediately. At first I only saw him from afar through the glass wall of his office, occasionally he would smile at me when he caught me looking in the direction of his desk before I’d quickly turn back to my monitor, blushing. One day however he came to the door of his office and motioned me across. I was surprised at first and mouthed, “Me?”, in reply before he said, “Yes Steven, I’d like a quick word with you.” I hurriedly stood up and forced a nervous smile as I walked over and entered his office, closing the door behind me.

“Take a seat Steven,” he said, smiling as he straightened his tie and sat down behind the imposing walnut desk. “I’m sorry I didn’t introduce myself earlier, I’ve been up to my ears in work since I started looking into your division’s performance. My name is Peter Laveroc, I’m the head of accounting for the company.” I felt a little less apprehensive since I settled into the comfortable leather chair and began to get a sense of exhilaration now that the man I’d been fantasising about was chatting to me in his office. “Pleased to meet you Mr. Laveroc, I’m Steven Smith”, I managed to reply. “Now Steven, I have to tell you that although I like to run an efficient office, I prefer being on first name terms with my colleagues. Please call me Pete.” Slightly embarrassed but with that same thrill in my stomach I apologised and remembered to call my superior Pete. “I have to say that I’ve been very impressed your work since I’ve arrived, and I have a proposal for you.”

This almost sent me over the edge with anticipation. Since I’d been working for the company I’d been doing odd bits of administration and dogsbody work for a few of the managers, mostly helping out the personal secretaries when their workload was too much. I knew I was good at my job and had been expecting for a promotion but if Mr. Laveroc was going to say what I was hoping he would say, I’d be over the moon. “Steven, there’s a lot of work I need to get done in your division and so far I’ve always managed without a PA. However I’m going to bite the bullet and get someone to assist me, how would you feel about being promoted to being my personal secretary?”. I had to suppress a yelp of excitement as I replied to his offer. “Yes... ehm, of course Mr. Laveroc... I mean ehm Pete. That would be great.” My new boss stood up, smiling, and outstretched his hand. “Excellent Steven, on Monday your desk will be moved in here and we can get to work.” He grasped my hand firmly and looked straight at me for a few seconds that seemed to last for ten minutes and then sat down. “Actually, you seem to have everything up to date with my colleagues’ work, why don’t you leave a couple of hours early and I’ll see you next week.” I tried to keep my composure as I stepped back and went to leave the room, “Thank you, well... I’ll see you on Monday morning sir.” I heard him chuckle slightly as I said ‘sir’ and he replied, “Indeed, Monday morning,” as he looked back at his laptop.

The weekend was a blur. I kept thinking about Pete, although I still thought of him as Mr. Laveroc; he had an air of authority that I liked. All I seemed to do was masturbate and think about what I would wear on Monday. My preference would have been the black bra, panties and stockings that I would sometimes wore in my room at night. I thought about wearing the panties under my work trousers but I wasn’t sure if I could bring myself to do it. I wasn’t ‘out’ at all and I’d never dressed up in front of anybody before, let alone in public. Eventually I decided that if they were hidden under my clothes anyway I might as well. As intimidating as working with my first real male crush was, it was also incredibly exciting.

On Monday morning I followed my usual routine but slipped on the black silky panties before I pulled my trousers out the dryer, but when I pulled my work clothes on I discovered they had shrunk at least two sizes. Since I was running late as usual (especially since I’d masturbated in the shower while I lathered up my breasts, my nipples going hard as I came), I had no choice but to put them on and run out the door. It wasn’t until I got to work that I thought about the combination of my panties and the far too tight trousers. I looked round and could see an obvious Visible Panty Line around my ass. I decided there was nothing I could do and walked briskly towards my new office. I opened the door, relieved that I was just on time and found Mr. Laveroc standing behind his desk, shirt wide open and showing his toned chest and torso, as well as the outline of a sizable cock through his unbottoned fly. “Oh I’m sorry Steven,” he calmly mentioned, “I cycle in to work sometimes and get changed in the office, I should have warned you.” Flustered I replied, “I’m sorry sir, I’ll ehm, just step out.” “Nonsense, I’ll just be a minute. Nothing you wouldn’t see at the gym anyway!”. I forced a polite laugh, “Of course, ehm yes.”

I hung my coat up and bent down while I placed my briefcase beside my desk, forgetting about my panties. I heard a cough and then, “I’d guess you work out too then Steven”. Embarrassed but excited I replied, “Well, occasionally...ehm sometimes.” Mr. Laveroc. walked over slowly and said, “Maybe you should come along to my gym sometime Steven, it’s a top class place, you’d like it. I’m going to fetch my coffee, there’s report on my desk I want you to proof read if you want to get going on it.” As he walked out I mumbled a reply, blushing, and tried to compose myself. I went over to the main desk to pick up the report and nudged the mouse as I lifted it, waking the computer up. As the monitor flicked on it revealed a web browser open at what looked like a porn site. Surely not I was thinking. I noticed my boss chatting to someone across the open plan room and had a quick look. It was true, Mr. Laveroc’s browser was open at the member section of a transvestite and transsexual site. The image enlarged in the middle of the page was of a feminine looking guy sitting on a desk in a white blouse and a short miniskirt which showed off long smooth legs covered in stockings up to his mid thigh, and held up by suspenders. My thoughts were racing as I quickly put the computer back to sleep and tried not to get an erection. I quickly went to my desk and put the report down in front of me just as Mr. Laveroc walked back into the office and sat down. “I just need that proof read Steven, I’d like it done this morning so I can get it sent off today.” I could feel my cock getting hard and pressing against the underside of my desk as I told my boss that would be fine. After a couple of minutes I heard him say, without looking up from his screen, “Actually I’d like to get a few lengths in at the gym this lunchtime, do you fancy joining me?” He looked up and smiled. Suddenly panicking inside I stuttered, “Ehm, well...” Then my boss interrupted, “Steven, you really should, it’s a top class place. Very exclusive, we’ll probably have the pool to ourselves. I insist. What do you say?” I fumbled for words while I thought about the consequences of the offer. “Well, yes, that would be great. Ehm, thank you sir.” Mr. Laveroc smiled saying, “Excellent. It’s not far, we can walk round at noon.”

Apart from not having a towel or swimming shorts with me, my big problem was getting topless. Could I get away with people not seeing my breasts, and my panties? Or did I even want to hide them considering who I’d be with, and what I’d just discovered about him. The next few hours felt very long indeed.

To be continued...

This is my first submission to Literotica, so please give me your opinions about the story. Thanks!

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Part 2

Noon finally came after what felt like a very long wait. “Ok Steven, let’s head round to the gym for a quick swim. I know you probably won’t have come prepared since I sprung the invitation on you, I’ll get you everything you need when we get there.” I stood up and followed Mr. Laveroc out the door, thanking him. The way he said it sounded slightly strange however, as if there was something he was holding back. We walked the short journey in a few minutes, making small talk. The gym was quite impressive as I’d been promised; it was housed in a recently renovated building that must have been over a hundred years old. “Here we are”, my boss motioned me to enter the gym and held the door open for me. Once inside he led me to the basement down a marble staircase and into the swimming pool. “The changing rooms are just over there Steven, I’ll be back in a minute.” The way Mr. Laveroc smiled left me nervous, but I walked over to the changing area, admiring the pool on the way. What could he be up to? I discovered that the changing room was just that; a square room with wooden benched around the walls, and no cubicles. I began to panic; what if I had got the wrong idea about my new boss? What if I get fired? A few seconds later I head footsteps echoing outside and I sat down on the bench feeling pensive.

“Now Steven, we’re all set. I borrowed something for you to change into and a towel. I’ll just get ready, don’t mind me.” Mr. Laveroc handed me a rolled up towel and proceeded to strip off. “Come on, don’t be shy!”, he added. I unrolled the towel and was shocked to find a very skimpy looking two-piece bikini in white. I looked up, speechless, and could feel my face blushing red. “Don’t look so surprised Steven,” Mr. Laveroc said with a mischievous grin, “I’ve not only been checking on your work over the past few weeks, I’ve been admiring your body too. I’ve been dying to see more of it since I saw you, especially those incredible tits. Did you think I wouldn’t notice?” I could only mumble as I felt a rush of embarrassment. “And when I saw you wearing those panties this morning, I just had to do something about it. Well what are you waiting for my little slutty secretary? Strip.” I noticed that Mr. Laveroc had slipped his trousers off and was now wearing nothing but rather tight boxer shorts that barley hid his large hardening cock.

Nervous, but incredibly excited I made my decision and stood up slowly. I began to feel extremely horny and sexy, and looked into Mr. Laveroc’s eyes while I slowly unzipped my trousers and bent over while I slipped them off, revealing my ass and my panties. Next I slowly unbuttoned my shirt and took it off so I was now naked except for my black silky lingerie. My nipples and my cock suddenly went hard, and I could see my boss stroking himself through his underwear. “Mmm, you look even sexier than I imagined. I’m glad we see things the same way, now take those panties off and put on your bathing suit.” I could feel my cock straining against the flimsy lingerie material, “Yes sir”, I said as I pulled my panties down to my ankles and kicked them off. “Nice cock,” I heard as I picked up the bikini and put it on, “almost as nice as your tits and your ass.” I blushed and felt my cock push against the bikini bottoms, “Thank you sir, though your cock seems pretty nice from here too.” All of a sudden Mr. Laveroc whipped off his boxers and a thick, hard, seven inch cock sprung out. “How do you like it now? Want to see it up close? I need some personal assistance I think” I didn’t need any further encouragement and dropped to my knees, my boss’s cock twitching with anticipation in front of my face. I placed my tongue at the base of his thick penis and licked all the way back up to the head, extracting a moan from its owner. I then opened wide and slipped it into my mouth, sucking hard and licking. Just as I started to bob up and down, pushing this dick in and out of my wet mouth, Mr. Laveroc clutched the back of my head and pulled me towards him. I almost gagged but grasped his toned ass and kept sucking, while my own cock was just as hard and begging for attention. “Mmm, that’s so good,” my boss growled, “I’m going to cum soon, swallow it all.” All I could do was mumble in reply as I could taste precum my tongue. My boss started to thrust in and out of my mouth faster than ever and I tried to suck harder. All of a sudden I felt a spurt at the back of my throat and I tasted Mr Laveroc’s cum in my mouth; I swallowed hard as I milked it from the pulsing cock I was sucking and the thrusts slowed down. When the spasms of semen stopped I licked my boss clean and stood up. “That was incredible. I’ll expect a blowjob like that every morning from now on from under my desk.” The thought made me even more turned on and my six inch dick popped out of my swim suit. “Oh I see you’re excited too,” Mr. Laveroc said as he noticed and stepped towards me, wrapping a strong hand around my cock. I was already close to cumming and after only few strokes, my orgasm shot into the had engulfing it. My boss and I met each other’s stare for a second before I was roughly spun round and bent over. Mr. Laveroc plunged his hand into my swimsuit and spread my cum over my asshole, lubricating it enough to slip two fingers in; I moaned loudly. “So you like that do you?” my boss chuckled, “Well lets have some fun in the pool shall we?” I felt myself being lifted into Mr. Laveroc’s arms and taken toward the poolside.

When we reached the water I was dropped in to the warm pool, my boss athletically leaping in after me. He grabbed me by the ass and kissed me roughly before spinning me round again and pulling my bikini bottoms down. “Mmm, please fuck me Mr. Laveroc” I gasped. “I told you to call me Pete didn’t I?” my boss grunted, “Fuck me Pete, please sir” I replied. “Mmm, I like sir though” he growled as I felt a hard cock at my asshole. There was a short stab of discomfort as Mr. Laveroc plunged his cock inside me but it soon gave way to overwhelming pleasure. He pushed in and out of my wet ass as I groaned and water splashed around us. My boss then grabbed my breasts through the soaking, almost transparent, bikini which made my moans and his grunts louder still. Surely someone will hear us I thought, then decided that I didn’t care; I was feeling so slutty and ecstatic it didn’t matter. I felt my neck being kissed roughly and the thrusting in and out my ass get faster and harder. Soon there was another spurt of cum exploding inside me. My boss kept his cock inside me for a few seconds and then pulled out slowly, making me wince with pleasure. He let me go and I turned round to see him grinning and me, “Did you enjoy that then?” I got my breath back and told him of course I did. “Well Steven, there’s something else you’re going to do for me, and from what I could tell from our swim so far, I think you’ll enjoy it.” Almost shaking with anticipation I said, “Anything you want sir.” He chuckled. “Excellent. I’ve decided that if you are to be my personal assistant then I’ll need you around all the time. Therefore you’ll be joining me at head office full time, I’ll have one of my other managers keep an eye on things where you were.” “Of course sir!” I replied, giddy. “The thing is Steven, with a body like yours, I think it’s more fitting for my secretary to be female if you see what I mean. From now on you’ll be called Suzi at work, and you’ll have a bit of a makeover to let you perform your new duties to the full. Now let’s get back to the office.”

I couldn’t believe what Mr. Laveroc had just told me, could I really pass as a woman full time? Work was getting more exciting all the time, I just couldn’t wait to see what my boss meant by ‘a bit of a makeover.’

To be continued...
 
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