New Author looking for assistance

[Harvey_32]

Hi.

I have written several stories, mostly about incest or losing virginity to an older woman.

The stories range from 2000 to 24000 words including a block of 3 which are stories in their own right but jigsaw together to describe a mans sex life over 40 years.

I have approached quite a few Editors for advice and to date have had very little response so I have submitted one story which, inevitably, has been rejected.

I hope this is the right place to publicly ask for assistance, particularly with grammar and compliancy etc, but also some additional advice on making the stories flow.

Thanks for reading this.

Harvey

 

[_Lynn_]

Hi.

I have written several stories, mostly about incest or losing virginity to an older woman.

The stories range from 2000 to 24000 words including a block of 3 which are stories in their own right but jigsaw together to describe a mans sex life over 40 years.

I have approached quite a few Editors for advice and to date have had very little response so I have submitted one story which, inevitably, has been rejected.

I hope this is the right place to publicly ask for assistance, particularly with grammar and compliancy etc, but also some additional advice on making the stories flow.

Thanks for reading this.

Harvey

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[Harvey_32]

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Thanks, I hope it's now done.

 

[Tigersman]

What sort of time frame are you looking at for a turn around time for your stories?

 

[Harvey_32]

What sort of time frame are you looking at for a turn around time for your stories?

Today...

No seriously there is no rush, I started writing this stuff 6 months ago and having one rejected I've been convincing myself it's not up to scratch and would love to have someone check them over for me, particularly the 3 that run side by side.


Ironically since I started this thread I resubmitted the rejected story which is currently pending black, I think it's ok to post links to the site:
https://www.literotica.com/s/the-hotel-room-next-door

and another short story which is now available:
https://www.literotica.com/s/aunty-catches-me-on-the-rebound

Thanks for reading.

H.