New Author lookin' for Feedback

[Chickenchowmein]

Hi! Hello! Greetings and salutations!

I'ma new author. I recently posted the first chapter of my first story (Angels and Demons). Yup, popped that cherry, so to speak. Anyway, I'd love to get some good feedback. What'd you like? What'd you hate? What do you want to see more of? What time do you go to sleep at night? Wait! No. Nix that last one.

I just submitted my second chapter, so it should be up in the next few days. Thanks in advance!

MODERATOR NOTE:
The author posted a feedback request in Story Feedback. A link to that post is below.
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1261776

 

[lovecraft68]

Congrats on your first story.

You're better off posting this here

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=1

More people go there to give feedback, this forum is kind of quiet. Also link your story in your post, people get lazy and don't feel like looking you up-and lit doesn't make it the easiest thing to do.

Good luck

 

[Aella_]

Hi,
I just answered your post in the "Story ideas" forum (loved your idea).
Could you give us a link to your story? I couldn't find it.
thx.

EDIT
Never mind. I just found it..
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2954548&page=submissions

Also: from what I've seen, most authors here post a link to their homepage (Stories and Poems) either in their profile, or in their signature. Makes it easier for readers to find their stories.