Nerdy girl is secretly a MILF hunter

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There’s a young woman whose classmates (seniors) don’t think much of. She’s kind of cute but she leaves very little impression on them. Come prom season and a guy who doesn’t have a date asks her out, only for her to turn them down, saying she has something to do that night.

Her classmates are puzzled and think she’s just too shy to come. They all go to senior prom and forget about her...until one of them goes home early and walks in on their classmate fucking their mom!

Turns out classmate has been spending all of her off time building up a harem of moms and was celebrating with her own little prom after party minus the prom.

Question is, how did she do it?

1. Despite appearances, she actually can be charismatic and knows how to work her charms. She works at a part time job where the moms go and is able to start a rapport with them. She gained their trust and then seduced them.

2. Blackmail. No one pays attention to her so she’s able to easily sneak around and get evidence on the moms or their kids to blackmail them.

3. A little hypnotism or mind control. She doesn’t just act nerdy, she’s a genius with a specialty in manipulation and has found opportunities to get them all under her control.
 
It is a very interesting idea if you do not mind here is an ideas for you.

You could make the Nerdy girl the target of the cheerleaders (or some other snobby group) that make her life hell. They have a tradition where every year they pick an innocent virginal target and harass her until they get something on her or make something up with fake proof. They then force her on prom to be in women’s restroom/dark classroom (something) with the agreement that she has too give each of their BFs a BJ(sex whatever you decide) one at a time the entire time of prom. To save them from doing it, making their BF last longer later....

The nerdy girl wanting to get revenge goes out and seduced, blackmails, hypnotizes (any number of kinks) their mother’s one at a time over the time up until prom. Turning them all their mom’s into her toys.

On the night of prom she has her their stand in for her (kneel in) while she video tapes it all. Not until the last girl takes a pic in the dark or over the side of the stall and gets back to her friends to show them do they realize something is wrong.

This would be a lot longer of a story though 5 - 6 chapter at least. Chapter for setup, chapter’s for each of the mom’s, and then a chapter for the prom. But could open you up to any number of different kinks/gender bends you want to explore.

Just some ideas hope it helps.

-C
 
Here are the tweaks I would do if I were to write a story like this:

1. Make the nerd girl a year older, maybe because she's delayed high school for a year abroad or something--preferably doing something that fits with whatever her personality is. Perhaps she's been away with her parents in some and parts of Asia and her nerdyness is related to some obsession with something she picked up there. Or maybe she's an exchange student and the different school systems makes her a year older. I know students can be 18 by the time they go to prom, but an arm's length distance to underage makes it less cringy, especially if the attraction is meant to have been building for some time.

2. Skip everything related to blackmail. I think it's just kind of lazy and makes it less realistic. To me, it's way hotter if she just has some it-factor that makes her irresistible to older women.

3. I'd tell the story from the pow of one of the mothers, let's call her Kate. She's been growing increasingly attracted to nerdy girl, who's been putting on her peculiar charm around Kate. But Kate has managed to resist, telling herself she's reading the signals all wrong and that she's insane to even be attracted to this girl half her age. Kate's never even had such feeling for a woman before, but she's drawn to nerdy girl by some mixture of motherly instincts (which works better if nerdy girl is an exchange student living away from family) and newfound sexual desires. Yet, she manages to not act on them.

4. On prom night, Kate drops off her kid at the prom. Thinking this might be the last time she sees nerdy girl (which again works better if she's an exchange student), she decides to see her one ore time. But she finds out nerdy girl isn't coming to the prom. Under the self-delusion she wants to make sure nerdy girl is OK, or maybe to convince her to go, Kate drives to nerdy girl. There she finds a bunch of other hot mothers, one of whom opens the door. At first Kate doesn't understand why they would all be there. One of the other mothers says something along the lines that she didn't know Kate was coming but says' she's not surprised given how she's seen the way Kate's been acting around the girl. Kate doesn't understand what she's talking about, and when the other mothers realize Kate's not in on it, one of them leaves into the back of the apartment. She comes back and says nerdy girl wants to see Kate. Kate finds her in the bath, naked with two other mothers pampering her. It turns out nerdy girl's been fucking the mothers individually over quite some time (again--remember age restrictions here). Before leaving, she's decided to have them all at once. It becomes clear that nerdy girl's indeed been trying to seduce Kate. Kate can't resist anymore and joins in a lesbian orgy centered around nerdy girl.

5. The scenario lends itself to domination. Both ways work. Either nerdy girl is dominant and she makes the older women worship her. On prom night, she makes them do it together. Or she's inherently submissive and draws out dominant sides of the mothers, and she submits to them all on on prom night.

6. As a potential side-story, Kate could have some feud with one of the other mothers, which is resolved through sexual bonding on this magical night.
 
It's an interesting concept but it should be framed and told differently. The interesting question in this story is how this nerdy girl acquired this power to obtain a harem of moms. To tell that story, you need to tell it from the nerdy girl's perspective, or the perspective of one of the moms. And that means you need to ditch the prom as the frame for the story. The story must start well before the prom and explain how the girl acquired her harem. That's more interesting than starting the story at prom time, when her classmates find out about the harem.

You could end the story with the prom, which is where she gets her revenge on her classmates, or something like that.

Maybe she's acting as the tutor for a bunch of dumb cheerleaders, and something about her makes her irresistible to the cheerleaders' grateful mothers. (and/or fathers!).
 
respectfully disagree w/ Simon Doom - this could work out VERY well from a MILF's kid's PoV. The initial spark in the story becomes on discovering the classmate with Mom and focuses on unravelling how that happened.

S/he gets into Mom's email and finds the blackmail material, then works to remove/negate it. If female kid, "So I kissed my girlfriend. Neither she nor I are embarassed about it." If male kid, "So I went into the glory hole. My girlfriend was in there and I played with her pussy while she was sucking off guys. It was hot!"


S/he befriends the MILF hunter & gets into their confidence


S/he finds/makes blackmail material on the MILF hunter & goes mutually-assured-destruction on her. "You touch my mom again and I'll break your hopes for any job other than Micky D's."


S/he dominates the MILF hunter and breaks her of her accomplishments. (Of course, there's temptation there isn't there - maybe the both of them start hunting together afterwards...)

Lots of kinky, twisty shit could go on here, lots of flipping of the power dynamic, perhaps some incest... depends on how it ends up getting written!
 
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