Nerd son and sub mommy

[thedark_mu]

The son, a pc nerd, has three big black kids bullying him at school. One day, they follow his home and check out his mom, a tall, plumpish blond, and the next day, they get to her house and gangfuck the white bitch, abusing her. The nerd son was there, peeking and jerking himself.

 

[Texguy84]

Was he peeking, or did the bullies make him sit and watch while they used his mom like the whore she was?

 

[thedark_mu]

He was peeking, cock in hand, licking his lips watching those big black cocks dilating his mommy's holes.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I kinda like the forced to watch idea.

 

[Erosian]

"PC Nerd" is so cliched. Maybe we want this to be more relatable. How about the awkward dork or loser? And, do the dom assailants have to be black? Maybe just the sports team captain, or just some dumb thugs?

 

[Sean Renaud]

We can change the race if it's gonna make someone feel better. I"m not particuarly fussed one way or another. It's just that currently in America black men forcing themselves on a white woman is still a powerful image.

I don't see any reason why the boy needs to be a nerd or socially awkward or any of that. Shy of being Jackie Chan what the hell is anybody going to do when significantly outnumbered and outsized. It takes a lot of martial arts training to overcome a significant weight advantage (there is a reason why boxing and wrestling and MMA are separated by weight classes.) So you pick an "average" sized guy say 5'8-6'1 and put him u against four guys who are say 6' 1"- 6' 5" and have easily fifty pounds on him and despite what they show in WWE you don't really overcome those kinds of odds.

I suppose you can make the argument that it's worth trying but this is porn world where all women realize that they wanted to be raped after about twenty seconds. I'm heavily considering this for a loose series of stories I'm calling Porn Heavy.

Basically I coined (I think) the phrase a few weeks ago and it's meant to incompass all of the thigns that happen routinely in porn that just defy logic. You know like a guy shows up to deliver a pizza and when he arrive the several girls are prancing around in their underpants and claim they can't pay him because they misplaced their wallets which are in their pants. Then they look at the pizza and find that it's not a sausage lovers but they all love Big Sausage which he then proceeds to feed them. And I want to just cover a bunch of things like that and this seems like a good fit.

 

[Erosian]

Depends on who you ask, I guess. I do agree that this would be a "Porn Heavy" type of story. If not a home invation or a lost of a really bad bet, this kind of thing would not happen at all. However, I still think for the sake of writing "erotica", it has to be relatable to the reader. Otherwise, this can't be written any more than "Guy with female, BAM, insertion of gang, gangbang".

I suppose we still want to have a weakling of a guy to show dramatic contrast. Since we are going to have several confident men to come in and take over, we need to counter that with a very non-confident person to allow this to happen.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That can happen too. I disagree with your point about it being "relatable" I think that the reason why so many people love watching porn with a plot is because it makes us smile. It's the same reason why we enjoy a lot of comedy movies because just those situations are hilarious, not because they are believable but simply becuse they are not believeable but simiply because they are not.

Having the guy be weak as a contrast works fine too. I was merely pointing out that I don't feel that it is at all a requirement for the story. I these stories they always make it sound like if your husband had been a real man he would have leapt to his feet, beaten three to five guys who are twice his size to bloody pulps carried his wife off into the sunset and ravaged her until she could think of nothing but his incredible cock for the rest of her life.

 

[Erosian]

That could be a great story too! I suppose as a form of escapism, we wouldn't have to make the story relatable. And I'm not saying we have to make the readers feel like "oh, I can totally see myself in that situation", it's just that it can be a total turn-off when the story is a complete cornball and cliched. Pizza boy delievered a "sausage" pizza, really? Maybe it's just me, but I can't laugh and stay hard at the same time.

 

[Sean Renaud]

But I would argue that brands like Brazzers Big Butts like it big which feature skits about girls being frisked at the Airport for forgetting to remove their steal butt plugs before trying to fly or as I mentioned Big Sausage Pizza feature those kinds of things.

Or Devil's Film's series which one scene has a male waiter trip and pour a glass of water on the woman who stands up offended then pours a glass of water on the man's crotch declares that he got her wet and proceeds to suck him off. Obviously there is some kind of market for this is all I'm sayin.

Still you may have a quality point

 

[Erosian]

I guess I just like to hold up a standard even when it comes to porn? On the other hand, I do love Brazzer.

Now I'm torn. Ha!

 

[Sean Renaud]

Because for some reason you don't think that cornball can be great. I mean yes there were Chinese people in the American West but what was wrong with Shanghai Noon? Idea? Cheesy as hell but entertaining? I think so.

All the spoof movies before it became a Genre. Hot Shots, Scary Movie 1 & 2, Blazing Saddles, The Gods Must be Crazy.

 

[Erosian]

I guess it depends on your taste. I just don't like to put out anything that doesn't meet my personal standard. Doesn't mean it's better or worse, it just makes me sleep better at night.

 

[SweetDreamStories]

It's just that currently in America black men forcing themselves on a white woman is still a powerful image.

I agree.

 

[MyWidowMom]

How old are mom and son? Also does mom enjoys this or cries and screams for help?