Neighbours and their sexual proclivities?

geronimo_appleby

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I was just looking outta my study window, lookin' fer inspiration, and I thought about all those windows I can see - adjoining properties, people over the other side of the crescent, etc.

Would a chapter on each property be a good idea? Take a house per chapter and describe the sordid goings on behind those walls?

I mean - is number 21 fucking that hottie from 23? Why is there a sporadic, but a definite excessive number of men visiting number 11? Is that cute girl from number 42 getting her pussy licked, and if so, by whom?

Thoughts and ideas by PM please.

geronimo (in need of imspiration)
 
Chain!

Definately a good idea, one that would be happy to participate in, if you were planning on making it a Chain Story.

Everyone could write about a different house and what happens in there.
 
DarkBee said:
Definately a good idea, one that would be happy to participate in, if you were planning on making it a Chain Story.

Everyone could write about a different house and what happens in there.
spot on. :)
 
That is a great story idea, and one that has a lot of potential. Run with it...
 
Up to You

Up to you Geronimo, I've never participated in a Chain Story, but not saying I wouldn't.

HOWEVER ....

My feeling is that since it is YOUR idea, YOU have to post the first one. Then take the reins, so to speak, keep an eye on who posts next, etc ...

You said you haven't been writing, but if you're gonna do it, you have to make a commitment as well.

BrettJ

Writer / Continuing On / Sensualist
 
BrettJ said:
My feeling is that since it is YOUR idea, YOU have to post the first one. Then take the reins, so to speak, keep an eye on who posts next, etc ...

I agree, let him give us a starting point from which we can pick up and expand the story.
 
Here's an idea.. feel free to take it or leave it, of course.
What if each house fits into one of Lits categories? Like one couple is into BDSM.. one is a lesbian couple.. one could be a Loving Wives story..

All the stories would be posted together in chain stories. Authors could sign up for what category they want their house to be in.

The titles of the chapters could be the addresses or neighborhood name.. just a thought..
 
LadynStFreknBed said:
The titles of the chapters could be the addresses or neighborhood name.. just a thought..

Or, perhaps:

Behind Closed Doors: 1 Maple St.
Behind Closed Doors: 2 Maple St.

etc.
 
LadynStFreknBed said:
Here's an idea.. feel free to take it or leave it, of course.
What if each house fits into one of Lits categories? Like one couple is into BDSM.. one is a lesbian couple.. one could be a Loving Wives story..

All the stories would be posted together in chain stories. Authors could sign up for what category they want their house to be in.

The titles of the chapters could be the addresses or neighborhood name.. just a thought..
Great idea! Love it!
However, the story could still be a chain, but with each house a different type of sex (I still need to fill Chain Stories for the Survivor Contest :p ).
 
LadynStFreknBed said:
Or, perhaps:

Behind Closed Doors: 1 Maple St.
Behind Closed Doors: 2 Maple St.

etc.
So this is an excellent idea/format to work with, I think.
 
LadynStFreknBed said:
Here's an idea.. feel free to take it or leave it, of course.
What if each house fits into one of Lits categories? Like one couple is into BDSM.. one is a lesbian couple.. one could be a Loving Wives story..
All the stories would be posted together in chain stories. Authors could sign up for what category they want their house to be in.

The titles of the chapters could be the addresses or neighborhood name.. just a thought..
This is a basic premise of the idea. I have received several PM's on this, mostly telling me to kick it off with a story . . .

Okay, my story is lanned around No1 Literotica Avenue - Jenny (young and sexy lady) hosts a party for her and her boyfriend's friends. At the end of the evening there are a few people left - principally Jenny, the b/f and two or three of the b/f's friends, with one possibly being his brother. The upshot is that Jenny is the focus for their attention, starting with mild flirting (during the party), which leads on as the night grows progressively late. Ultimately I'm looking for the b/f to be edged out as Jenny grows more and more aroused at the prospect of playing with two or three men together.

As for a category to put it in, hmmmm . . . LW or group sex I suppose.

Okay to start with?
 
Suggestion

I would really put it into the Chain stories category Geronimo unless you plan on telling all the contributors to post some kind of notification that it's part of a longer, ongoing work.

Not all LIT readers will search something out, they can be lazy.

BrettJ

Writer / Creator / Sensualist
 
BrettJ said:
I would really put it into the Chain stories category Geronimo unless you plan on telling all the contributors to post some kind of notification that it's part of a longer, ongoing work.

Not all LIT readers will search something out, they can be lazy.

BrettJ

Writer / Creator / Sensualist
LOL, can't they just :rolleyes:

now i just gotta find time to push the piece out. i guess it'll be a shorty, around 3000 words. mebbe even one for MVP? ;)
 
Thoughts

Why not write it the way I do some of my stories - set a goal of so many words per day until you're happy with it?

If you want the other writers sharing the Link to make it a great read, you've got to commit to that as well.

As for MVP - as I have yet to see Dime One from them in 2007, I am not too keen on them at the moment.

BrettJ

Writer / Creator ( frustrated at that ) / Sensualist
 
And please stick with your original idea: that where one person (you maybe?) is looking out of his windows and sees his neighbours having sex, which we (other writers) will describe.

This intro doesn't have to be very long, as I said earlier, just a short description of the neighbours' houses and who lives in them and what the storyteller sees.
 
DarkBee said:
And please stick with your original idea: that where one person (you maybe?) is looking out of his windows and sees his neighbours having sex, which we (other writers) will describe.

This intro doesn't have to be very long, as I said earlier, just a short description of the neighbours' houses and who lives in them and what the storyteller sees.
quite a challenge switching POV, but i guess it's do-able with a little thought. don't want to confuse the reader right at the start.
 
Just write the first story as you see fit. Decide what you want the chapters to be, whether you want it as the narrator looking into his/her neighbors' windows or just telling the story of each house. It's your chain story. :)
 
Hiya

Good early morning to you all, hello Geronimo.

I am in the midst of writing, my newest just got posted a few hours ago. There's a minor glitch in it, so I posted a corrected version [ a good part of the story got posted in Italics by mistake ]

Hope everyone enjoys their day.

BrettJ

Author / Working on New Stuff / Sensualist
 
geronimo_appleby said:
I was just looking outta my study window, lookin' fer inspiration, and I thought about all those windows I can see - adjoining properties, people over the other side of the crescent, etc.

Would a chapter on each property be a good idea? Take a house per chapter and describe the sordid goings on behind those walls?

I mean - is number 21 fucking that hottie from 23? Why is there a sporadic, but a definite excessive number of men visiting number 11? Is that cute girl from number 42 getting her pussy licked, and if so, by whom?

Thoughts and ideas by PM please.

geronimo (in need of imspiration)

nice idea. but you need a hook - does the narrator peep? are these people all incidental accidental exhibitionists? should webcams be involved in some chapters? are some chapters 'as told to over coffee'? does it end in a block party orgy?

I don't have the strength for a series of chain story, but I did my variation on this idea in Old Porch Swing, my earth day entry, but, as happens, it sorta went off in a direction unlike your idea.
 
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