Needing a little help

[Alyrahh]

I'm in the process of writing a story to submit to this site, and I've found myself needing an outside opinion. The reason I decided to post here instead of mailing one of the volunteer editors is as follows;

First, the story is unfinished, and I know the majority of editors would rather not work with an unfinished story.

Secondly, I am not looking for help in grammar, spelling, or punctuation, as my personal method of writing consists of pounding out the content first, shelving the work for a few weeks, then going back to make any grammatical changes etc. So, in other words, I'm only looking for someone to critique my writing style, plot, and content thus far.

Lasty, I wanted to find someone who was willing to offer this particular service instead of e-mailing someone and making them feel obligated to.


So, anyone willing to assist me a little on honing my work, please contact me.

Hmm...I just re-read this post, I'm not nearly as anal retentive as it sounds!

 

[Skibum]

If you just want a quick look, or an opinion on content, I would be glad to help.

skibum@literotica.org

 

[Alyrahh]

Thank you very much Skibum, I did have someone who e-mailed me and has been giving me some feedback. But, I would appreciate any opinions. I will e-mail you my work. I look forward to it.

 

[Hecate]

I see you already got the assistance you were looking for - so I'll offer for additional feedback if you still want some (no good with grammar and such myself but since youwere not looking for that bit I figured I mihgt as well offer *s*) ... else I'll be looking forward to see the finished work on here

Good luck !

 

[Alyrahh]

Thank you Hectate! I'd be honored to mail you a copy as well, any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

 

[Evesdemise]

...And still more offered feedback to Alyrahh...Feeling all the love now?

I see, as the others here, that you have more than an adequate amount of offers for feedback on your draft. However, I will offer mine as well. I am a volunteer editor for literotica, and enjoy checking out any new material out there. I will help if I can. Good luck to you in your endeavors.

 

[poohlive]

In case if you ever want a (counting...) 4rth person to help, lol ole poohbear is here to help, lol. Send it on over.

 

[poohlive]

Well, they say three is the magic number, I guess that is true, lol. Be cool

 

[Alyrahh]

Oops!

Pooh and Eve-
I apologize for not responding earlier! Sometimes I need hit over the head with something

Anyway, I'd be more than happy to send either or both of you a copy of my story. I have been working with a wonderful editor, but as I stated earlier in this thread, any and all feedback is more than welcomed! If you're still interested (even after my neglecting to respond!) just drop me an e-mail and I'll forward a copy to you ASAP.

Aly

 

[Skibum]

Alyrahh, how is the story coming? Will we be seeing it posted soon?

 

[Alyrahh]

I sure hope so!

Skibum-
I suppose it's coming along fine...as long as I can keep myself focused and work on it instead of the 14 or more other stories I have started

The editor I'm working with is exceptional, he's a gem! He's being very patient with me, and I'm still trying to figure out how I'll ever repay him for all the hard work he has done and is doing.

I want to thank you again for your help as well, I'm astounded by how many people have been so friendly and helpful to a little ole nobody like me.

So, to answer your question about seeing it soon... Cripes I hope so! lol

 

[poohlive]

don't worry, the good thing is there is no pressure, except for your fans, lol. We want the next story now, lol. Well anyway just work like you want to, and remember this is supposed to be fun, well, lol, HAVE FUN!!!