Needed: Beta Readers for an epic BDSM Novel/Novella

[PrincessMoonbeam]

I posted in the beta readers sticky, but no one responded, so I'm going to post this here and cross my fingers. The story is nearly finished. It's about 10 chapters now (roughly 80,000 words), with (I think) one more chapter and an epilogue. I've kind of tweaked a lot and changed the ending at least three times and I need to know that everything works.


Here's the blurb:

The country of Eldon is in the midst of a rebellion against the crown. When the princess discovers she's captured the leader of the rebel Heilaun army, she thinks the war has been won. Instead, she finds the tables quickly turned. Enslaved by a powerful Ceremony, Regina is made aware of a side of herself she never knew existed, and finds herself facing a difficult choice: will she invalidate the Ceremony and take up her crown, or will she submit to the Will of the Gods and give in to her lurid desires? Suspenseful, romantic, and called "semi-humorous" by at least one person, The Will of the Gods is a story of self-discovery, the thrill of BDSM, and the power of submission.



But don't just take it from me:

"The sex is hot... Keep it up! (literally)" -One of my editors

"Truly immersive... Promises more satisfaction to come... Very, very well written!... As usual, brilliant work." -My other editor



PM me, brothers and sisters, and let me take you on a journey.

 

[LWulf]

I might not be the first person you want to go to (because I speak frankly and question a lot (I already see two things that I would bring into contention)), but I wouldn't mind giving you a hand.

I have to remember where to turn on my PMs first...

 

[TheAdvocate]

I'm available at the moment. I am willing to give you feedback.